i have read first few chapters and honestly, the plot is quite interesting, especially the world building is great. it's a great read,Really looking forward to the future chapters..keep rocking
Awesome imagination & thrilling story line its really getting as into the story ....great start??keep rocking shamiii???? Egarly waiting for the upcoming chapter....
I know your thinking why I only rated this novel 1 ?It is because I find the synopsis catchy and will start to read it so I'll comeback after reading the existing chapters and chang this review. ?
At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.The main character, Devon, seems to have enough character to make him feel alive and make one look forward to his development.The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.Looking forward to the next chapters!
Honestly a good novel with someone who can be considered a “villain mc” he’s well written and merciless though I do think there should be some form of reflection as he is a child and kills a bit too easily but it also makes sense in the way that children are simple and dont have complexities with how they think about life. Sorry about the stupid wrong but again 10/10
Nice story after a long time. Want more chapters pleaseee....................
I love this novel it is very detailed, the author channels aspects of the real world in his story and it's nice how the characters feel and react.
This is one of those rare occasions where I can appreciate both the story AND the author!The story itself was fairly linear to start, but that quickly changed...Why did it change?I'm glad you asked!BlueLighttotheWest genuinely cares about the readers and listens to the comments. He also responds to the comments which is a nice change of pace!Thanks to this ****** fact, a good stort became a great one!So for those of you who are judging this novel by the first bit of the story, please take me at my word and trust that this story gets better and better as it goes on.So then, the by the numbers review:-Writing Quality: 4/5. For those of you doubting this, just keep reading. Our author is growing along with our MC!-Stability of Updates: 4/5. Life happens and we're only human. Sh*t happens! When life doesn't give the author flu-shaped lemons, the chapters keep pouring in!-Story Development: 5/5. I gave a 5 for two reasons; the first being the exceedingly fast pace at which the MC and story escalates, as well as the fact that BlueLighttotheWest listens and has enhanced the plot as he learns more about writing this sort of novel and it continues to grow magnificently!-Character Design: 5/5. This one should be obvious to the actual readers, but for those who haven't had the chance yet, our MC is unique and has great depth, not to mention the potential for so much development! He literally starts as a baby! The only way to go is up!-World Background: 4/5. The missing star is only the fauly of this type of story. The world changes very quickly and there is little time to stop and smell the roses, so to speak. Otherwise, the imagery is well done and the universe is pretty well organized.So overall, 4/5 stars. Though to be honest, the story is only increasing in readability. There was one moment where I started to feel the story was about to go downhill. Immediately after having that thought, there was an shift in the environment which immediately brought me back in.For those that felt this review was too long and didn't read it and just skipped to the end etc...Read this. It's great. :)
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Excellent story but it's been on hold for so long I hope u hurry up and update it for the your fans or aleast give us the courtesy of telling us are u planning on finishing it or discontinuing it!?
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I really like the novel, the story is really good not just the story but the author really has some good writing,I like the story background it seems like there will is something more big to it I don't know what is it but anyways it's really good it deserves a read.