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hey .. if you have any kind of suggestion Monster can write your thoughts here .. I made this novel for my very good gamers friends .. especially Cloud, rome, Lyz and others .. hope they see this story ..
This book is Hella Awesome.MC is narcissistic, comedic, slightly perv, Cunning, Chaotic Neutral.The FL is awesome too. I especially liked the twist about her character.I WHOLEHEARTEDLY WISH THAT THIS GETS CONTINUED.
Wonderful! The best game or litrpg novel I've read in ages.............Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression.............The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things. ............The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing.............I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
(Review 150 chapters+)Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast. Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated. SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER): In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy?? On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda. Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.
Read all the chapters in 3 days, have been enjoying it a lot.Cool story, characters and world building, including kingdom building...There are still some grammar errors and some caused by distraction but they have been diminishing so I don't really see a problem.Only thing that i find a little annoying isn't the grammar errors but the punctuation ones, those are really important, if you could pay a little more attention to them, since they are really essential for the telling of a story and the reader's impression of it... would be a great boost to this novel.In conclusion, great work, pls don't look at my criticism as somethhing bad because that wasn't my intention and keep on doing what you do.You have something really good here, keep up :3Cheers ;)
Beautiful novel put to shame by translator. I remember reading translations of this novel on a site called walkthejianhu (or something similar) and they pulled it off wonderfully, and they weren't even getting paid or taking donations (as far as I can remember), they were purely translating it because they enjoyed the novel and wanted others to read it as well. It's very sad to see such a wonderful novel be translated so badly, please up the quality or get a new translator altogether. Hurry and catch up to previous translations as well please...
⚠️ WARNING ⚠️ THIS novel is for dumb people ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Don't read, it's a disgrace to all writers in the world.????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Baited by the synopsis, actually bad, and from what I can tell, is actually a fan fiction.