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NTR novels merit only one star.... disgusting ?
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The novel is just regular in the first two chapters and then bam! The action starts, everything is good and am really hooked but if i may suggest, i'd like to author to cut down the paragraphs a bit.
i have to say i loved your story at the beginning and i still find it amazing but i couldnt continue past chapter 56. for me jason's attitude towards dani's father is horrible. until that moment in history it is already possible to see that he is in love with her, and even so he does not save her father (which by the way is very strong and could be an incredible support point, even without him knowing that he was part of the guardians).even though jason could have done it differently, i understand his author's line of reasoning, but for me it took away some of my desire to keep reading. Maybe one day I'll come back to read it, I loved your story so far :) (this is all just my point of view, continue with the amazing work author-kun)
I do like the story, but the MC is really irritating sometime. He's suppose to be a genius magician and a trickster yet he fight like a berserker most of the time. I'm only at chapter 30, but most of his fight he run straight at the opponent while revery injure. Or acting reckless in a sparing match and got his azz hand to him.
this book requires you to read it carefully as the word might trigger stumbling of different ideas that the author is having. overall good book to read. i recommend this to those guys out there who likes to feel strong
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
I love it looking forward for story and regular updates ?????????????????????????????????????????????
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Real going well. Thx for every one support please guy read it rate me so i can know how much better i am if u like it give a powe stone. Otherwise just like and cmmnts for any improvement
