Chrrrr!
Staring at Su Mei Fan glistering eyes full of tears and her stubbornness on rubbing them off, Ye Ai Ning shake off the idea that it must be her. With her over the top clumsiness, Ye Ai Ning forbid her from touching any liquid near her. Also, Su Mei Fan helped her to finish them, even doing more than what is asked of her. She was even eyeing her like a hunter all the while.
"Well, now that that's over, Tomoe." I turned my attention from Papa to Mama who was calling me. "Shall we unwrap the rest of these presents?"
Seeing a couple of names, low levels, and zeros started making me depressed. I promised myself I would rise this number eventually.Going on to the next and final section of the system I hollered out "Shop." When the words had fully dissipated from my surroundings the world stopped. It was almost as if some divine being had stopped time just for me so that I could look at the possible skills and items available in the shop. There was also pills that increased my stats as well as something called a Gachi Gachi Gacha.
"Hubby, come and help the child pick a name." her fingers lightly rubs the baby girl's nose, slightly smiling.
The storyline is ok, charcters are lively, but there is still missing some thrill along the way. Since this is quite like a vampire story, it should leave a remark to readers.. put a lot of suspense for the characters, while plotting romance since this is a romance novel.
Now the battle has ended. Huna army has won over the armies who came to protect Buddhist monastery and monastery is destroyed and many monks got killed. few monks are able to run away with whatever they could save, some scriptures, records, relics or only their lives. The apathetic gaze of Arya looked at the scene at the front and she said "Virtues always prevail over sins. When will it happen in the mortal world? As of now, it seems, sins are prevailing. If sinners increased, it might also create obstructions for the spiritual journey of yogis due to the reduction of the spiritual energy of virtues."
"Do you like it? It's not hard at all, a bit of magic and everything can happen. Plus, the dwarfs that i hired are one of the best craftsman out there, so probably in another few days my whole place is gonna be finished. Do you see that big building they're working on? That's where my slaves are gonna be! If you're interested, you're free to visit me later on. I got the best quality women and pets. Oh, you might even be interested in my new collection of Hellhounds from the Abyss Plane, they're not that strong in the beginning, but if you feed them well, it might evolve into a Cerberus, the king of the Hellhounds. What do you say?" blabbered Butcher non-stop spitting spit everywhere as he introduced his merchandise, treating the slaves and even the poor renowned Hellhounds that were used to scare kids as simple, mere dogs ready to be sold at an auction
To say it bluntly, the rest of the trip did not go fairly easily. For right about when Duke said this, they turned a corner to be met with an irritated group of about 6 guards that no one had apparently seen or heard coming.
Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
just started reading this and I'm soo into the storyline and plot. All the foreshadowing I've seen uptil now i bet the plot twists are going to amaze me fr. can't wait to literally read it all!!