Buried Secrets

I had fun reading it! I feel sad about her life but it was nice that she had a positive attitude towards everything.  You did well building your characters author :)

I read the chapter and my heart broke so dose she shift late or something?

The storyline is ok, charcters are lively, but there is still missing some thrill along the way. Since this is quite like a vampire story, it should leave a remark to readers.. put a lot of suspense for the characters, while plotting romance since this is a romance novel.