--------MC Is TOO STUPID----------Don't waste your time.---‐----------------‐-------------------------KILL YOURSELF----------------------------------------------
Hey potatoes! What happened to the regular updates dude? Its been awhile since the last chapter and i wanna see if crimson mist gets revenge on that baroness and if he can get his little sister in at the sect .. dont chuck it in without a reasonable response atleast, because the story is just getting good .. ** all the best either way my friend you have a talent for story telling and hopefully its still with this storyline thanks again ?
Here before the trashy people come and ruin something that many people enjoy (the “ugh another sign-in novel” kind of reviews)
The the first chapter kind of gives you an idea about what's gonna happen in the future and how the MC's gonna go through changes. But you never know for sure. The plot seems to be developing at a steady pace too. Maybe a little too fast for my tastes.And there is foreshadowing EVERYWHERE, which kinda lets the reader's imagination run wild thinking about the possibilities that the future might hold. Will definitely keep an eye out for its future releases.
The story is interesting I'd like to see more chapters update soon. And keep up the story line please. I always like rebirth stories, especially the business ones.
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Five stars because I like the plot and the author promised to complete the novel in the annoncement.Thank You.........................................................................................
Yes, the shameless author had to come and do it, no seriously, give it a try, if you like, you found a new book to keep you entertained, and if you don't...Well, at least you can say you tried :)
This story is absolutly amazing i started randomly and got hooked i loves the characters and the story development of course there were grammatical issues but nobosy perfect
Was very fun to read and I enjoyed the story. Great work.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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This story looks somewhat interesting. But I would have to read it before completely judging on whether it’s actually a good novel or not. I guess all that’s left is to wait huh... ahh waiting is such a pain in the butt. Oh well! Highly anticipating this story! :3 (as well as many others) I’ll probably leave a better review once this comes out though!