I watched the first 5 chapters and they were very good, but it's a shame they were so short.
I'm still in the beginning of the story but so far this does not disappoint. I hope the author does not disappoint as well.
This is a very good work. I generally dont give review but this one deserves it. I can see a promising book that has potential to break record. Good job author.
The story seem lacking.the author makes essos seem weak and small and didnot have proper knowledge of GOT and how reality work.You should read Game of Thrones : The Norther Realms to get the feel of got.
I like this story the plot, the character growth and how the mc and characters don't just get things without any hard work. No plot armor, MC can lose and get hurt. The enemies can win and out scheme him.
Great novel, please continue.I saw that he wasn't very well known, so the story is that the MC's personality is great, so I wanted to pick up on some power stones, and I'm going to tell a few friends about the novel as well.I hope you will continue.
It seems to have a good start, with a System that, for now, serves no purpose other than showing the MC's progress (at least from the explanation given in chapter 5). There’s an interesting idea about the banquet, where it’s not just for socializing with nobles and recruiting talents, but we might actually see real duels (which will definitely happen, since this unique characteristic of the banquet was mentioned). So, I'm very curious to see how it will continue and how the duels will unfold.
l Like the story and character development. some things dont make sense but l can wait for more chapters ..................................
You have a lot of points that need to be addressed.1. Edit your work, smaller paragraphs are easier to read.2. Personal speech, the way you currently handle things related to people speaking is very confusing and not reader friendly. Adding personal speech is really easy by marking what was said with "blablabla". Read popular novels and look how they structure interaction of characters.3. Just in the first 2 chapters alone their are so many things wrong with logical thinking and game related stuff. For example, no one stays in a guild just because the guild leader says so, only idiots do that. Or losing all Equipment and having to start from lvl 1 again, players don't have those powers ingame even gm's can't just take your equipment and reset your lvl.There's so much wrong with just the first 2 chapters. Good luck
This is a great novel qnd i like it. Author can you put a international tournament in this novel because that will be sick. Just like King Of Avatar Novel they have a tournament like a eSports. I put my attention on this one if you keep uploading a new chapter. And i hope you put my request ?????
Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc..Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc..Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc..
So very interesting and I highly recommend reading this novel to everyone who wants something to read. This story is pretty good from what I see of the other reviews I’ve read and the summary alone. I reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming ???