Nope nope nope nope. First chapter alone the amount of grammar mistakes makes me want to gouge my eyes out. This is a non native english speaker and maybe a terrible translator with it. Either missing words so you have to go back and read sentence again for it to kind of make sense or they just don't make any sense at all
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Awesome! I could not put the app down. I enjoyed reading this book and I am anticipating more. I check often for work such as great as this and hope to see more.
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Cringe.The author genuinely thinks making fun of readers and breaking fourth walls is funny, but he handles it in a way its cringey and unimmersive. There is no coherent flow, its just scenes stamped against one after another, its kinda like watching a tv cartoons where next episode are not related to the next.Or its like watching Gintama but unlike Gintama this aint funny at all. One of the cringy comedy I could not forget are done this way.Reader: Wait a minute this seems odd.Mc: **breaks the fourth wall and proceeds to say: Hey if you the reader think that way you are wrong cuz [insert reason here]I have short term memory, adding to the fact they are forgettable I wanted to bring something up. I remember some scenes that i wanted to point out but oh well.
The writing and grammar in this story are horrific at best. I thought i was reading a MTL but then i noticed that even those are more comfortable to read then this. I could only get past 2 chapters and i still have no clue what i just read. the only question i have is what story were the reviewers reading when they wrote there reviews
So basically you are all hyping about a novel in which the Mc is a skeleton and gets contracted by a female "goddess" or something. What's the use? he cannot even kiss much less have the stick. And this novel probably has an unreasonable plot. But people are still 5 star spamming it. hope they grow some brain.
This is a mess of unexpected things turning into a good story. I can't say that it's random, as there's some mystery to that. It's obviously a harem of moster girls. It's unique to me though, so it seems fresh. If you want, or expect, naughtiness, it has it. Enough that it makes me cross my legs tightly at times...for more than a chapter at a time. It's got crude guy (MC) humor that's actually something that gets me to laughing pretty hard & at other times I want to flip tables.I can't help but like this story. It's a pretty well thought out has direction. Editing can be a little rough at times. The author cares about the story and wants to share it with others. Thank you for sharing.
it's bad. The description was interesting and the first chapter was good but the moment he lands back in time, we get the cliche young master wanting women scenario. His focus should be to raise his strength instead of hitting on women right of the bat.Honestly, there are 100s of novels like this one out there. Not original in the slightest. MC is literally a moron which holds true from the first chapter title. all in all, it's bad.
it would be fine if there was just horrible grammar but even worse is that the story itself just sucks so bad it's unbelievable.......................
Awe full generic novel with MC OP with some power as always. Don’t read if you had enough of your thousand chapter wuxia novels. It’s killing brain cells.
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