No hate for the author but this is my honest review..Imma start with the character design.Other than MC, we dont really know about other character.We dont know if Mc has any family.We dont know if he is in a guild.We dont know a lot of thing to be short and im sure this can be solve with more chapter.(As currently writing this review,there are 13 chapter).So im giving this a 2 out of 5 stars.Secondly would be the worldbuilding.There is nothing explain about the world Mc live in.So i give it 1 out of 5 stars.Again there are not enough chapter as of currently to evaluate.After that would be story development.According to the author pace,except for a few force plot (such as Mc sense of guilt or the college girl awakening),the story are really solid.The only problem would be not enough chapter to evaluate the novel.I give this 4 out of 5 stars.Next would be the writing quality.Im not some kind of writer or any kind of figure that would put a heavy account on writing cus for me as long as it is readable than it is good enough.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.Lastly there is update stability.There is only 13 chapter so the update is frequent.All i hope is author would not suddenly decide to go MIA when the novel reach chapter 70 - 80++.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.
This story is not suitable for human consumption. I do not understand why the author has refused to hire an editor. I assume it is because of insatiable greed as he can't bare to part with a single penny to ensure his work is understandable. Reprehensible.
Furthermore, the author's personality at the end of the chapter really bugs me, constantly complaining about ranking or uploading chapters that just say there will be no chapter etc.
I dropped it in the mid 90s and checked later chapters and the grammar did not improve. Concept is good and I should rate it higher in that regard but the writing is repetitive, grammar is trash and chapters contain little to no actual content, making this a giant waste of time that I can't consciously give anything more than one star.
Readers, do not waste your time!
Stable release nice story development good grammer for me at least tehe well some people might have better knowledge at me about grammar so if your that someone dont be angry
They update it at least 2 times a week. there are few mistakes in grammar and spelling, but overall it is very well done. I just have to say one more thing and this last thing is to the translator. Thanks for putting your time and effort into this.
First review. Yayyy !!!!
And I like the story. Hope there are more uploads like atleast 10 chapters every week. Keep it up author !!!
Plzz dontt addd hareem it so boring and make MC like some sexual type beast who only wanna **** women nivel is best i lije it and add more poerfull villain
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I am a new reader of this npvelso I saw the synopsis and read some reviews here. Then i gave it a try. Its really good with the world building and character formation. A lot of words in a chapter too. I enjoyed it very much. But I want more action and drama here
First I have to thank the author for the fantastic work. Your book is my every day highlight.This book and its predecessors are a peace of its own. An MC who knows what he has to do and has a clear goal. The road he has to walk is long and burdensome. But every step he has to walk is essential for his goal. And I like it.Thanks for your patience and time, dear author.
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
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