Unique storyline. I liked how the story started at the beginning of the chapter. This story reminded me of the movie "Nerve." The writing style is well written. Grammar and use of words are remarkable. The main character is well portrayed. Definitely recommended for reading. keep up the good work, author!
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Another fantastic story with a great plot and storyline This one has me on the edge of my seat “literally” lol
I cant wait foe the nexT part to come out
Extremely annoying MC. He wonders why a 27-year-old woman doesn't see him, a 19-year-old as a man/potential lover even when she has a fiance. In addition, the causes trouble for no reason when he can end everything in like 10 seconds he draws it out. Just kinda have decent plot and horrible execution.
It’s definitely a very unique and interesting story! The characters are all very diverse and contributes in some way, and there’s also a good balance of many elements - the only thing, in my own complete opinion, is that I think the tempo of the story gets a bit uneven in later chapters. It’s definitely worth reading though, and I’m excited for future chapter!
Probably the worst one of its kind , atleast in other of these the mc is super op or makes use of the system, in this the system barely comes up after the initial chapter this story doesn't have anything good about it
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An early review But very well written, The characters are so relatable and nicely expressed, I read through the 7 chapters without sleep at 4 in the morning?can't wait to read more
It's a wish fulfilment novel. Idk if it's with the translators or what but I can't bear to read it for too long. my brain cells can't accept this level of stroke. If this ever get picked, please fix it.
I read through the first three chapters and wow. I love the motive for the main character, as well as his progression so far. I have never read or even heard of a Reincarnation story that has the protagonist actively trying to go back to his old life. Makes for a very fun and entertaining read.
100 chapters in and there is still no major plot. the MC is playing a game but I'm not sure what the story is about. splitting focus between the real world and the game world is unbalanced. the majority of the story happens in the game world and every update in the real world seems trivial. the MC doesn't really have any goals in the real world and the game aspect does not seem like a game, no other players interacting with the MC it seems like he is in a typical wuxia world with no consequences.