Phaeron12
this novel is a mess, not a masterpiece. it's a chaotic mess surrounding the guy who is supposed to be the secret killer. that's all I'll say in this review.
this is just copy and past of the same novel already on web novel under the same name that already has 200 chapters. the only difference is the other one doesn't have locked chapters. recommend reading over there instead of wasting your daily chapter unlocks
Name: 永恒武道
Author: 月中阴 Lv.5
Chapters: 1974(4.36 million words)
Status: Completed
the story is mostly fine. There's just one thing that I hate about the MC, He says chickie buggies a lot... I hate it. I feel like I'm losing my brain cells just by hovering my eyes over it. Although the story explains the reason behind this, I don't like it one bit
I never really understood this whole thing about parents spoiling their daughters books. Is it some fetish? A paraphilia? Like if you're of legal age and don't have a criminal record. You can adopt a daughter and literally pamper her with attention and affection. Seriously, there must be thousands of orphans and they don't even want a rich and super powerful father, they are satisfied with a healthy human and ethically responsible relationship. You don't have to believe me wherever you live must have social workers taking care of it. Just don't mention that the idea came from the internet.
Decent ......... at least better than the other ones ........... pick it
Basically digging novel and post apocalyptic bunker novel mixed into one with beast taming thrown in. Cheat is almost basically the same thing
this was the 2nd most popular in the vote pool, then removed, while a bunch of others got released, and to make it even ore insane the no1 voted novel (my maids are all antagonistic) still there. is the voting exist for spitting in our face?!
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It strikes the right balance for me between goofy and serious, I liked how the little skills would wander off and have adventure Events happen to them
I shall give this one star to counter all 5 star reviews without stating reason.
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A somewhat below average store novel. The translation quality seems good but the quality of the writing itself is quite poor and often leaves me confused. The explanations of the worlds power system, the mcs store systems features etc are all really scuffed. I still don't entirely understand the power system.
How do you get levels? What is a mark and how do you get one? How did our protagonist get to level 15 if you need a mark to break past level 10? None of this makes sense. If it weren't for the above issues I'd give this a 2.75/5 but I'm settling with a 2/5 for now.
