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okay so the story flows decently i guess but the mc lets people provoke him without trying to defend himself or telling them to shut up he doesnt show off his power to people at all and stuff anyone that doesnt like such stories like me leave before you feel youre brain dying
Well author San is here I would like you to atleast read this story because I always wanted to write one if you have problem s with it please tell me in the comments and if like my work please also support my work and send your lots of love in the comments section.
I am really speechless right now. This amazing book is the perfect definition of fantastic and intriguing. I love everything about it. The way you write and make use of words is just so superb. I can't wait to read more of your books. Keep it up. This is a wow!
This is a wonderful story...
You will be easily hook to this book because of its mc...
And most likely those women charactecters...
The story is great...
The characters are great...
The mc is great...
The fights is great...
Overall a wonderful story...
It's so much fun reading this. Only 2 chapters but I feel like I have travelled far and I was there in the pages with the character. Bonus is the author's personal experiences in the paragraph comments. The voice and tone are very natural. My only suggestion though is to start a new paragraph for another character's dialogue. Please don't combine them in one.
This novel is off to a great start. Keep it up and keep on writing.
I came from his previous works such as Lady of Labelle and Queen of Queens on Medium and Novella. To say the very least, they haven't lost his touch.
- Writing Quality: Very elegant imagery. As a person who's very keen on surroundings and location while reading a story (think J.R.R. Tolkien), I like this author because they're precise about what's going around the characters. I enjoyed reading about the "manga sword" in C2, it was weird but I could see it vividly.
Story Development - It seems we're only at the part where characters are being introduced and the setting is being described. Hard to say where this will lead, however, I feel someone or something is going to do a 360.
Character Design - Hard to say so far, but they have me intrigued with characters like Momoko (pervertedness and shyness) and Obara (seems like a jokester). If this is truly Isekai, I wonder how they'll shape the story in the next world. I like how Momoko's perception and thoughts are laid out for the reader to interpret. Knowing the author, it starts off quite linear however they add some type of weird twist on the protagonist that's unusual. Momoko seems a bit pervy so who knows.
World Background (I'm guessing this means location?) - The synopsis says she's average so when she's describing the world around her it all seems a bit lackluster, it may just be me. The protag is apparently going to an entirely new world so maybe his pictorial story-telling is used better there (and honestly in a new place like a town the reader needs a good description of what it looks like anyway). It's to soon to tell.
All in all, great start, need more, good luck!
This novel is written in a entertaining way.But that is the only positive thing I can say about it. It is garbage in any other way.Whole premise is insane and the execution is horrible.Stats have no context or comparison, so they are needlessly wasting time and space. Logically any motivated action would reduce motivation but the MC is completely unaffected. Stats only have an impact when it is convenient for the plot.If the MC had more experience or mental maturity than an ape he could avoid at least 90 percent of the plot.Typical I have been reborn without my brain syndrome.Side characters like the MCs family are even more oblivious and stupid than the avarage family in transmigration novels.Spare yourself the brain bleach.
To keep it short: I loved everything, but the absence of updates is killing meThe No romance tag stang too in the beginning, but the story is so rich, fun and the schemes are so good, that I don’t mind it anymore...In any case it’s much better than a star system sized harem in my opinion
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This novel is a grammatical abomination...................................................................................................................................................
Good.