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I'm disappointed. I Read until Chapter 165 but become so bored of the story developed... There were few Dialogue and so slowwww
Wasn't the original title 'The restless spirit's father'?
Also the story is good. I haven't finished yet so I can't say anything about the ending. Sometimes it felt a little confusing but I think that was because I was too tired to understand what was happening since I read the majority in my bed. At night.
Trash Book. MC does the same thing over and over again where he gets offended or gets into a fight with someone who has no idea who he has and thinks that MC is a random, and ends up killing them brutally even if the other person surrenders. No character development whatsoever. Same repetitive plot. Best part is that the book even got cancelled.
interesting so far a unique take on the genre so it'll be interesting to see where the author takes things. keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more chapters.
the book is good, but why have the recent chapters (starting around Chapter 80) evolved into a copy of the book Ultimate Scheming System. The whole progression of this book has started to match it. Scenarios, events, plot, and characters are a match except one is a success system and the other is a scheming system.
I thought its a doctor/nurse helping patients with system cause the title is medical system, guess Im wrong. Its about evolution or something like that. And why is the title "Medical System" when the system is not??
Hope for the best keep going
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On the 1st day I voted for this one , the druid one and the livestreamer with the emerging monsters.
But well apparently we are not getting any of them, for years now I lost close to all my interest in strength growth and combat followed my combat...
system
raw link plz
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I read the other's review from the raw reader and "understood or misunderstood" something, and that is "The Mc has LOLI'S HARAM!" welp actually make me give a positive point for this story.
