Wow. This book is such a mind blowing... As i read Synopsis I was forced to read the few chapters. Amazing work!
keep writing !
This book is absolutely fantastic. I love the MC Eisen so much. This book will have you laughing, crying, and cursing the shyt out of the bad guys we come across in this story. The family dynamics is touching. It shows a man who had to give up his craft because of an accident. It shows a man given a second chance to spread his craft through a game. It shows a father who never gives up on his kids no matter the struggles they have or might go through. It shows a grandfather believing and encouraging his grandkids that they can be or do anything they set their heart on. It shows Eisen spreading his wisdom of life to his in game friends and encouraging them to live their best and most awesome life.
The story is good but try not to take it too serious .
The only problem I have is the Calculations
it's really annoying
The amount of exp he's getting doesn't just seem to add up . The story would be really good if the calculations were accurate
Enjoyed the novel for a while, until it was repeatedly pointed out that the author and main character are sorry homophobic and have an unhealthy view of sex. Out of several sexual encounters there is one that is consensual, and it's not with a real person. Dropped it after it was stated that the main character thought he wouldn't have saved a character because he thought they were "a gay".
Sad that all of the 1 star reviews don't even read the novel. This one is one of the better mmo novels so far not like super god of war that was released last week. They are just butthurt that the novel they wanted didn't get released but it's still not fair to leave a review withouth even reading.
Really liked the novel, i hope you keep giving new chapters meow. .
love the story, the character interaction is extremely funny, especially the father and son duo
also love the 'trap' aspect
hopefully in the future mc would accept the fact that he is a trap and would troll other people
Really good, has some good misterys to it. Has a very high potential depending on how the auther reads. And its definetly atleast to where i have read above average. The only problem being the update rate.
I kind get why this story has so little views even with the number of chapters.
Listen man i get that you’re a newbie writer and i commend you for your work both for the writing style and the amount of chapters.,heck even the genre of world traveling is dope.
But!
I just started the novel and so i need to be hooked so what do you do? You introduce an extremely hateful and annoying character at the start.
Then? You make the mc’s first enemy into his love interest... now i get that the second one is not necessarily bad heck even good if done right.
But you just messed up her character and made it seem as if she is an ice queen then and extremely warm person then a sadist that likes to slap anyone who mentions her sister to her which is extremely ****ed to be honest as a normal human much less a man wouldn’t fucking stand by if someone slapped him for no reason but you made the mc not only not rebuke her but also just apologize to her and hug her to make her feel all better..... that made quite angry. Huff i don’t want to be too harsh to a budding writer since I understand that you’re doing you best and for that i commend you but i just shared with you what i felt from the first 40 chapters and so this would be extremely good feedback to you.
I lost all desire to continue after he hugged her when she slapped him like who the **** does that? Anyway hope you all the best.
This was amazing !!!Im really excited for the next chapter
Straight into my library. The novel is very good.
World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.
Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.
System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.
Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.
Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't know
Updating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author.
Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
this is a pretty well written story, the cheats, the world background, characters and all but sadly the MC is too much of a goody two-shoes busybody who could get OP fast but instead has to be all Mr righteous. as at chapter 700, there are multiple chicks that want the MC but he's like i can't protect them so not yet and yet he has a secret realm all to himself. it's a really nice story though but i don't like the righteousness. I mean, prior to his 'reincarnation' he was a contracted killer who supposedly killed for good. he's understandably overprotective but his righteousness is too much for me. Other than our conflicting ideologies, everyone should read this