The First Chapters have some mistakes, please read more as the next chapters will get better and better.
Author, I have to say, I grasped what the basic idea of your novel is from he first two chapters, not even three, just two. Usually, it takes four to five, but yours proved to be 'different from other books.' I don't have any feedback to give you, except to wish you good luck in participating :)
Wow an amazing work! I loved it a lot. With more updates, this sure will be a blast! Keep updating and you will surely find success. Good luck!
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I have already heard about 3 good writers falling into their trap.
As an avid reader of fiction I strongly condemn such exploitative practices.
Whats more this work is already pailgraised.
A fantasy novel isn't my strongest genre, but I like this one. The synopsis is intriguing and can attract readers who are into fantasy. However, I recommend the author to explain well those that needed an in-depth explanation for the sake of those who don't understand the terms used in the novel, besides Webnovel has readers all over the world. A few mistakes, but it's a good book.
Keep it up, mate.
Seldomly have i read a story with a worse MC than this. He's retarded. During this first 8 chapters of this story nothing of interest happens and you're getting fludded with the idiocy of this mc.
There is nothing appealing so far, I will continue till chapter 20 and maybe update this review.
I need more. Give me more. We all want mooooooore. Please we are starving. Give us more eye food. *Stomach growling noises intensity* Fooooooooooooood.
I can honestly say that this has to be, if not my favorite mmorpg based story that I've read. Overall, the main character is great, not many grammar mistakes, and is just a great story I've truly enjoyed. I finished what's been added so far, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the great work!
The MC is moron. No really, he is, and even admits to it himself. Now there are ways to write a compelling story featuring a protagonist with that kind of handicap, but unfortunately this novel isn't one of those. It is, and there's no way to put it politely, generic and boring as f*ck. Everything from the characters, to the plot, to the writing is a slap dash, uninspired waste of both your time and fast passes (in case anybody can even slog through to reach the premium chapters). Give this one a pass. A hard pass.
Despite how I thought that it would just be a gaming story, I was quite pleasantly surprised at the character’s interactions.
I wasn’t truly focusing on grammar, but nothing major stood out to me. Or maybe I was too engrossed in reading. Which are both good things to have !
Definitely would recommend, and I hope that you continue to post more chapters ! Eagerly awaiting (●´ω｀●)
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