I was only able to get through the third chapter before quitting this novel. The writing is so bad. Practically every paragraph has something grammatically wrong with it. Hopefully it gets better, but I won't be wasting my time waiting to find out.
I started this book as a third book to keep me occupied while my other books updated.Boy am I glad I started reading this! it's got a somewhat generic beginning, however it quickly becomes something more.The author is doing an amazing job with world building and character development so far and the author is open to suggestion. There are twists and turns that make this book really enjoyable and I like reading this much more than my other books currently. This would be a perfect 5 out of 5 except for one minor thing that happens in the middle of the book but it's literally only one chapter and I'm very glad that I kept reading.
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I liked it at first but it turned into a martial arts sort of story later. Though the story is enjoyable but not my cup of tea.
This is one of the novels that start of not too great(it was good enough for me to keep reading and author was pretty much inexperienced back then), but becomes much better later on. It's also unlike most of the cliche stuff out there in this app. You want my honest opinion? It's not that this novel doesn't deserve webnovel but webnovel doesn't deserve it. It's that good.
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To lazy to write anything but I like the story want more
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I normally never write reviews but well I guess for that story I need to do it.
When I started reading this book at first it was a really bad experience cause the English wasn’t understandable at some points and u were forced to use ur brain to get the lines. I mean my English isn’t good as well cause it’s not my mother language/tongue but the author didn’t even made the he/she or his/her correct BUT the story overall is really really great. The author and the story has a lot of potential. The system is really well thought out. Of course not perfect cause for system novels it’s hard to memorize everything and u will made fails with numbers/math at some point especially if u just started with writing novels ...
Overall the author is doing a really good job. I’m enjoying reading this book and want to read more and more (sadly I’m on the newest chapter).
So guys give it a try and stop writing on every chapter that the English/grammar is terrible... nobody is perfect
MC is just dumb and basically a pussy. If I would read a novel I would definitely read one with an MC with much better character traits than this one.
It's a little weird to me to be honest. It just feels weird reading the story; there isn't much description and a lot of the story is first person (which I dont have too many issues with). The english is pretty bad, but it's reasonable considering the author's first language isn't english. However, his English just ruins it for me though an editor might be able to fix this issue.