Seems to be a blend of other stories of the genre. Overall good stuff, hopefully some longer chapters will be coming in the future. Xp and cultivating for greater power. Wonder what class he will pick next?
Great cover! it instantly hooked me for the story. And so far writing quality is very good!as for what should be improved. the synopsis... its a mess. I'm my opinion you should properly arrange it. Also after reading some chapters I noticed some of your sentences were too long. don't be afraid to go on to the next line. Also am very doubtful about your chapter names(perhaps make them a bit shorter?)
its a game but, not really. its another world but the mix of players, again not really. a weird blend which is hard to swallow maybe inedible. and why is this type of novel here again? i thought we were over with this? Now.The Mc has become a Npc which should have been ok IF there were no players.addition of players make me not take it seriously cus its a game. just a GAME i can't read it knowing its all Big BS. maybe later in the story author would make it so that this world is real and things. another problem is that people don't die even dead NPC( others) cant die they will revive, a big down for me because u can't be immersive enough in this because its just unreal.
It’s my first novel so I don’t know.But it’s a great novel.It also got me hooked.There sometimes some mistakes in spellings or grammar but I can understand what it actually meant so that’s not a big deal and I completely recommend to read It .
How do i describe this novel? Hmmmmmmm- oohhhh i know it!:CHINA NUMBA WONNNNNNNNMagh!! We get that china is great, just stop translating these novels for international readers already!!!
The story has a lot of potential, it is up to the author to fulfil it, but the description makes it sound epic. Will read soon. Hope it gets a lot a attention in the future.
Highly recommended ✓I'm honestly invested in this book already. The concept and the plotline feels me up with curiosity! The character seriously is about to experience a rollercoaster ride and I'm waiting to know more about the suspense that is to come. Looking forward to the next chapters. Fighting Author!?୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨