I liked the novel, the way he treats wives and slaves I didn’t like him being in the shadows it’s cool but it could have been easier, I would have read the rest but it’s very expensive 900 coins to read 100 chapters, without wanting to belittle the guy's job but the way is to see if someone pirates hahaha T.T
I find this story extremely hard to get into. Overall the MC lacks personality, emotion and vision. I cannot see myself getting into this story at the quality it had been during the first 5 chapters.
Whilst a large prologue was admirable, it read like a lecture written by someone with little interest in the subject matter and lacked the passion needed for it to work as a successful appitiser to get you into the story.
Instead it was hard to continue after the first chapter and only became harder from there on.
In addition, I don't think it's going to be as large of a hit as some of the other novels in the batch, mostly because it's dispassionately written administration fic.
I would have called it kingdom building, but the character doesn't have a very kingly attitude and feels more like a bored administrator fulfilling the task whilst looking at the clock so he can get back home at 5 o clock...
All in all, its one of my least favourite stories among the trials I have read.
Although I've only read a few chapters of the novel, I got to say that the author has done a pretty unique take on the road of cultivation. There are some things left to be desired though like grammar (which isn't really a big problem) and daily updates (would be great).
I hope the author keeps up the great work.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I enjoyed the story so far. The writing style is amazing! It surely is something to look forward to. The plot and visualization of the story is really good.
This story has so much potential as long as it is written consistently with a good plot and good character development along the way.
Please more chapters, Author!! I want some more !!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Oh, let's see, it's an anime like isekai novel. The reading feels like that the writer himself is an isekai anime fan. I liked the story but the characters design could have been better. Describe the characters more, (eg. what they are wearing). And also certain terms such as "miko" might not be familiar for non-japanese readers. So try to describe what they mean in the story. The concept looks very interesting to me, as an isekai can myself. Overall I pretty much liked the story. I hope you can keep your promise and release at least 1 chapter a week. Work hard.
friend and I read all your novels, and I can only tell you that I have seen how much you have improved, but the reason for my comment is to tell you about something that I find that you fail, which is when describing appearances, you only say boy "x" is handsome or charming. if you could describe some features eye color or something would be perfect
When is the next chapter out? This story is good, short story and interesting to read. I hope the next chapter comes out soon........????
This novel is going to very interesting and fun to read❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????❤️??❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️
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