Hello Everyone, finally here to right a self review.
So here's what you should expect from the novel- Semi Game System(you will know what i mean after like 10 chaps), Dark Worlds (like don't expect it to be all goody good out their), Comedy,
Romance, Monarchy system.
As for the MC he is going to be total Bad Boy as we go down XD
This is my first novel so please don't at all hesitate to criticize it, i love to learn from my mistakes.
Also if you have any doubts please mention them here as it is easy to acknowledge them here.
P.S- I am going to increase the chapter release soon.
THANKS FOR READING, AUTHOR OUT !
Okayy this story is great! I love how you interduced us in the first chapter between the bond of MC and his bestie.
Something that makes story even better is that the story is well-written as a POV and its in my fav genre!
Hope you'll post more chapters soon!
Its good. Compared to other "reborn as dungeon monster" narratives, it's miles ahead. Unlike other novels which make the MC spend 75% of the novel in the dungeon, we've been out for a while now.
The start isn't that special, but it doesn't take long for things to get interesting. Inner monologues of characters, including the MC, help narrate their own understanding of themselves. You can read about their actions and come to understand that yourself earlier, but, the author still has these narrations to help make the characters come to life. Its great. Later on these moments are even more vivid.
The fights are not my favorite, but they are good. They do feel drawn out but also well paced. Weird.
This novel won't end soon. Too many things to explore.
Haven't started reading but let's get you started. Is MC strong to stronger or OP, or is this a child growing to teenager and then Adult like someone's life? Here is an apology.
The first chapter was good. It made me want more but sadly, that eas the only chapter. Good job!
I will no longer be reading this book as the latest chapters are messed up or are repeating and is wasting money which is a shame as I thoroughly enjoyed the story till now
Very interested premise and promising. Curious when the villain tag will come into play though, I am excited for him to break and bring carnage
a nice novel with an amazing story!
Completly recommanded to read.
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A great novel filled with everything a man of cultures can ask for harem system win cest
The concept is really good, but the writing quality is kinda messy. You need an editor author.
love you all for reading my book, please let me know your thoughts on it