Firstly,I feel like instead of constantly changing the plot direction the author should have made it in a way that he progresses towards the goal while forwarding his romantic life but there has to be a balance or else the plot will just be all over the place, because if it was like that then he would have been able to purchase the grandmaster realm skill instead of buying skills he could earn. SecondlyThe writing was sub-par not saying I can do better, but I feel like there is room for improvementSo all this is was leaves you with a 4.4 star review
I have read this until chapter 160, and to be honest, i kinda dont want to continue further. See, this book author is quite a genius imo, he can drag 2-4 chapters just to explain something. Sometimes the xplanation can be important like xplaining the fey ecosystem and ability, sometimes unimportant like how writing mc's account book how much he spend and gain every penny, and sometimes can be totally useless.like copy-pasting the same fey abilities again and again with just 1 (ONE) skill addition. A good way to fulfill your release and word quotas i guess, good for him, but not really good for me, i mostly scroll all the way every xplanation chapters and totally not missing anything important. Filler chapter is still better than this kind of chapter, at least it's more entertaining.
And because of this too, the plot become slow and sometimes stagnant, it's like 3/4 xplanation and 1/4 story. Crazy right? i know. And imo the plot is getting inconsistent over time. Like, at first mc does not want to attract attention cuz he's weak, he got no backing, all that nonsense. But he stronkly pushing his sister to the front row with "my sister is awsum so she must attract attention" logic. I kinda wish his sister got killed off screen and he regret his decision in the future to be honest because of his braindead action.
Also mc made a promise to trading agreement with a web shop at the beginning, saying he's not an ungrateful person who pay other's kindness, but until chapter 160 that matter never comes to surface again. Well maybe becuz mc already rich guy now so he thinks it's alright to forget his promise, and thus he become the ungrateful bastard himself. His first retainer which he promised to heal also never appear again after he told him to find a big shop in the capital. Maybe he retired and decide to donate his insect queen to mc off screen lmao.
That's my opininon, go read it if you like this kind of writing. I'm not here to judge you.
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In a word; Excellent! The story is basically a detective story set in ancient times but with Qi and supernatural powers. The normal tropes of transmigrator with good luck and using modern thinking to get ahead are there but the MC has no system and starts as a low-level martial artist with no way to easily improve. He need to use his brain, and the novel is better for it. Excellent!
A perfectly evil and twisted MC done right
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
To each his own is a term, I would use for this story as its not bad, just that its not for me. Its early yet and we have an okay ML with a loyal sidekick and a rapid evolution process that happened in less than 5 days. I think thats what my issue is,I just cannot connect with the ML or any of the characters per se. I'll continue to read the story to see if I ca be influenced. But if anything, I doubt this story will stay in my library for long.
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I really love the theme of the book and the goals and I like how the mc takes time to change. I enjoyed reading the chapters so please don't drop the book