It’s already completed 429 or 440 something like that chapters
No harem, and there doesn’t seem to ve a chance for one to develop
Author, I think you should google out the title of your novel... hah. Even if you wanted to grab attention, don't you think this is too much? Are you playing with a men's dignity? Huh?
if you consider that rushed then this is like turbo level sh*t
can you add i shall seal the heavens?
Hey, i m tired...
A lot of revenge plots which escaltes from a minor matter to something irreconcilable which can get boring.
When they mention going to a restaurant..U know shits about to go down.
(This review has been made after I posted Chapter 315.)
Hey there. It's been almost six months since I've started writing this novel, so I think it's about due time for me to give another review to this novel from my perspective. Of course, if you take a look at the latest reviews I've gotten, you'd see that a great portion of them say that MC acts incredibly cowardly and newbie-like for someone who has a lot of experience, with some of them even talking about how I rely on a certain phrase a lot of the time (the phrase in question is "could not help but").
From this point onward, there's a possibility that I might spoil a few things about the story, which I would like to apologize in advance for. However, I'll still try my best to not spoil it.
First and foremost, let me talk about my reliance on a few key phrases, with the most glaring one you'd find while reading the story is the counter for "could not help but" in the paragraph comments. Then again, there are a few other key phrases I tend to use as a crutch throughout the novel, but let me point out that English is not my first language.
Aside from that, I've taken a great portion of the inputs you've given me, which I sincerely appreciate, and have varied my usage of words ever since. From Chapter 200 onwards, rarely has the "could not help but" phrase ever been used. But alas, reviews mentioning it still pop up, so I guess worrying about is useless in the end.
Moving on from that, let's talk about the MC's personality at the beginning of the novel. Similar to the active change I've made towards the omission of the usage of certain phrases, I've also taken action towards changing the MC's personality outright at Chapter 115 into something that was more in line with what people expect from someone with a lot of experience.
But once again, I still get reviews about how they don't like MC's personality at the beginning and how they call him multiple names under the sun. Believe me when I say I've already taken note of it and that I am planning to rewrite the beginning of the story once I graduate college (which would happen hopefully a few months after I post this review). I'm not oblivious towards MC's personality at the beginning, especially if I know why he acts like that in the first place.
In the end, I just wanted to make this review to tell everyone who is reading and who is planning to read this novel a couple of things. For those who have read my novel up to the latest chapter and are continuing to read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.
And for those who are planning to pick up the book from the title and the synopsis, just keep an open mind. It's part of the reason why I made at least 90 chapters of the novel free, after all. Of course, I'd like it if you get to around Chapter 115 at the very least, but I won't hold it against you if you don't.
Once again, I would like to thank everyone who has given me support and constructive criticism of what I've been writing thus far, making me realize that I still have a lot to improve on. I hope you enjoy the journey the novel shall take you on.
(This review shall be removed once the beginning of the story has been rewritten to fit the overall narrative better.)
let me make it plain, i love this story.... and I kindly recommend this book to other action readers out there. kudos to the author and I can't wait to read more of the chapters.
So many good novel to read. reincarnated and martial arts. hoping for new fast updates to all novels. this is one of the best novel i read so far.
After reading 40 chapters I can say that the title makes people infer very different things than the story contains(The main character isn't some pervert) other than that the world building rate feels good and the main character isn't some idiot who does things without a single thought(except his naming needs a bit of improvement). It's nice to see characters' growth and closeness to each other over time. It is written in a way that it doesn't take away from the action and the relationships between people doesn't happen in a mere minute of interaction, which is realistic and nice. Overall the story is good in my opinion and I'm definitely looking forward to see more of it.
Pls come back