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Great beginning great story a great MC until now the story is really perfect
The author did a great job the world buildings is very good and detailed
And the Mc is ruthless enough
The thing that bothers me a bit is the bloodline thing but I believe the the author will elaborate later on
The starting point of the story is catchy and cool. The characters are well set up.
very eager to see what happens next !!
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keep up the work
Understandable for the slow update because author is busy but keep it up! i could see the author is trying to write better and saw the change in writing! good luck author! I hope i can understand more about the characters!
Bruh this is so underrated, considering how good it is.
The story is fast paced with mutant gorillas and everything else mutant. Think X-men, sliders and a system meshed together in one action based novel.
I liken it to Japanese mecha anime. It's going well for now. Let's see how it goes...
It's pretty good, I would say it's unique compared to other cultivation novels with similar systems, I recommend giving it a try and seeing if you like it, this is my 3rd review ever so it's pretty good.
love it .... more chapter please .........................................................................................xo
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Writting quality:the quality of writting is very catchy and intresting and will keep you intact with the story Story Development:Story development can not be grasp by 1st 5 chapters, but one thing is clear that author knows how to do his work. and sometimes it's part of story to keep the suspense for later time.Character Design:Characters are unique, especially Amon and Valerio. the rest needs a little bit more of honing before we can make judgment.Updating Stability:it's good but not the best.World Background:The world background is very intresting, author has made multiple types of beings and power ranking divided very professionally.