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Ok the novel isn't the worst I've read. It started out decently, but it is the first I have ever dropped. That is because of the pure idiocy in which the author built the world. He builds up this apocalypse that they have to go to for a certain amount of time a year. Makes it dangerous and high stakes where you need to eat and live there or you die. Then makes it into a 'game' that you have to play in a gaming rig, even though apparently you need to play or it drags you in against your will. The player can also log off at almost anytime they sleep and still has to eat in the 'real' world after getting out of the gaming rig. I can suspend my disbelief for a lot of things, but this bugged me so much I just can't keep reading.
I swear to God, this is at least one of the 5 most infuriating translations I have ever read in my life. And this is coming from someone that's read several MTLs before. My goodness. The level of cringe in almost every sentence is so mind blowing, it's not even funny. The mc is just straight out bland, the writing is a complete mess with all the errors and the worldbuilding is still a mystery to me.
author why she you saying it is an original if it has demon slayer in it??it can't be an original if you get worlds or characters from somewhere(anime,movies and so on)
Greating writing quality, chracters inportant In the story have good background witch explains In waYs easy to undertand author has steady updates I just feel like for the main chracter Nero he is so op but he doesnt act like hE has any power like when in the begining he can sense stuff far away but later he cant and like he couldve say someone and it was a little annoying
Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.
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I love this author. All his cultivation books are well thought out and have such cool and unique concepts to cultivation. Cultivation novels usually have an element of repetition, but not here. He refreshes us with new paths of cultivation and adds unique elements to make it more refreshing.
The chapters are long. The grammar is good, with little to no mistake, but there is something always missing in each chapter. Basically, even though there is a lot things of happening on the chapter, I always feel it's quite boring. IDK if it's just me(?) or maybe I am just burnt out.
I've read 2 chapters and it's getting progressively harder. the sentences start making less and less sense as I go on and it's super irritating. this author is in dire need for an editor
I feel the presence of arrogant young masters, face slapping's and forced romance in the midst of this novel. This description, this plot, it's all to familiar.
overall, not a very bad novel the stories are very interesting though it has few grammar mistakes, the novel is quite promising yet underrated, keep it up!
"great zhou" setting... Just this single piece of information is enough for me to drop this completely brain dead novel. Can't even create a slightly original setting, there's no way the rest of the novel is going to do any better
