This time I couldn’t finish to 60. Not worth it man. The nonsensical pace is ridiculous. I don’t mind the MC “pure” but he’s not very intelligent and always behaves heroically unnecessarily. I’m not surprised if there’s even a Reverse Rape a long the way...
There aren’t many chapters so far and the story is just truly beginning and I’m not sure which direction it will take. So far this story has been very interesting and a somewhat different perspective. It is a fresh story and doesn’t have some of the annoying cliches similar books often have like seemingly no need to train.
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A Counterfeit Glory.
'Gate of Revelation' has a good concept, and it is implemented rather well, specially how the characters are connected to each other.
However, like many Chinese novels, this one, too, suffers from what I call the 'Counterfeit Glory', which means exaggerating and glorifying everything Chinese, and rejecting and shaming other cultures and traditions.
I have never, until now, written a review to diss a novel, this is the first time. The trigger was in Chapter 637, where a character, named Yang Lin says to a Swiss woman that she doesn't know integrity as her country proclaimed to stay neutral while secretly helping the nazis.
So the question that arises is, is China a righteous country ?
We won't go into details and create a debate whether China is a good or bad country - it has no end to it.
No country is righteous, that is one we must accept. It feels so sad to see such biased views in a novel you like reading.
Writers like Dancing, and that of novels like "I'm really a superstar" need to learn from Er Mu, the writer of 'Release That Witch'.
RTW has a mature protagonist, who does not spend his time dissing others, nor is he a loser who acts arrogantly because of some system. and he surely does not show himself off like a superstar after stealing other people's works. RTW also acknowledges and respects homosexuals. Where other authors create vicious jokes on them, Er Mu surprisingly shows us the touching romance and love between two females, Princess Tilly and Ashes. This shows the difference between these authors.
There are two things that I find are present in poor quality novels, like this one - 1) Arrogance 2) Irresponsible and cowardice.
1) A protagonist needs to be strong and still humble. If he is not a good person, and cannot be used as a reference for self improvement, why the hell must we read that novel ? Although Chen Xiaolian acts as a good person, there are many instances where we see his overly arrogant side which is usually unnecessary. The various scenes of discrimination are enough to provide proof.
2) A protagonist is a leader and a winner. There is no use and no reason for us to read a story about a loser- after all, there are many losers while there is only one winner. So it is very irritating to see a protagonist which has strength to act cowardly and selfishly. There is no need for me to write much, a comparison between 'Roland Wimbledon' from Release that Witch and Chen Xiaolian from Gate of Revelation is enough to tell that.
In short, it is a pity to lose such excellent works just because of their author's biased thoughts.
I am wondering why this is not higher up in the rankings. I enjoy this as much as I enjoy Ancient Godly Monarch, both having awesome lead characters and so highly imaginative authors that conjure fantastic battles they go through. The action is so engrossing.
One of the Most Unique Virtual Reality Novels out there right now it has it own twist and turns
Cant wait for the new Chapters
Keep up the good work Author keep grinding
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Overall a very good book to read. Very different from the other books that I have read. The developpment of the story is great its not too slow but not too quick making the story all the more enjoyable.
Praying to the author, thank you for this novel you have written for your devoted readers. We will read with all our might, promote with all our might, and help you raise through the rankings. Brothers and sisters, let us band together against gods, devils, dragons, hell, and heaven to land at No. 1. Let this pray end. Amen.
So far this book has been so enticing with the writing style and how descriptive the scenes have been, it truly paints a picture in my mind of how things are truly happening. The characters are very likeable and this story has so much to offer! I can't wait for more!
The best thing I find here is the writing quality since it is so easy to understand and detailed. The details are hard to understand in some books but here that's not the case.I see a chapter every day so the updates look stable.The story looks well thought and the characters look fine too... (Just read the synopsis guys, if this isn't a unique plot, what is?)The world background, the time intervals between the events everything is also written well.Overall, I really think it's a good story with a unique plot and good writing. Keep up the good work :)