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All around a great read so far and I’m definitely looking forward to being able to read more in the future. Also I have to say I just love the little brother, he’s so cute
This story is unique. The idea is pretty interesting. And the story development is not slow or fast. It is readable and intriguing. With every chapter, things are getting more intriguing.
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I still can't understand why you decided to rewrite this story and change it when the other version was good but okay, well this is pretty good but not my liking.
A new reader here, recommended by my friend. interesting story. But the newest chapter was uploaded one year ago!!! Did you forget your password? Anyway can't wait to read the new chapter.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
MC is an idiot, doesn't question why people will pay a ton of money to him just for him to play a VR game despite him wanting to hide his brain AI. Just giving away his secrets for free. Dropped at chapter 124 (right after this majorly stupid move).
Out of order chapters. Ripped straight from another site.
Hello, Author of Project Overworld here!Just to let you all know that this story is currently indefinitely paused (I got myself a job and I'm only doing some writing in my free time now).I haven't brought myself to set the state of this story into "Completed" yet since I feel like the ending is a bit rushed and there are some ideas worth investigating for a potential sequel.In any case, I had a wonderful time writing and releasing this novel on this website, so much so that writing became one of my favorite hobbies out there.I hope you all will enjoy reading Project Overworld if you are new to it, or other wonderful stories if you've already reached the ending point of my novel!
I thought this novel was going to be a dump with cliches and nonsense, but I found myself loving the story and its originalness, especially for such an overpopulated genre. The only downside is that the chapters are too short, and the story seems slower.
It seems a to be a nice story, with a good world and interessting characters. The backstory of the concubine is tragic and the reborn version is instantly likeable. But that the backstory is partially unknown gives the story tension, that is needed.The characters around him are also likeable, hopefully we see them develope. The adding of new characters is a bit fast, but it is okay, if it didn't continue with the pace it is going. It would be to many characters to keep track of.The englisch is sometimes a bit iffy, but it is mostly tolerable.
