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great novel for those who likes this kind of story. the character develompent is interesting, the plot is cool. well its a great novel, you can try it.
This is really fresh idea. like it so far. Need more!
This is really fresh idea. like it so far. Need more!
This is really fresh idea. like it so far. Need more!
This is really fresh idea. like it so far. Need more!
RAW:借钱节目中,我首富身份被曝光
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Hate it. MC is illogical and I can spot mistakes in some places. Some people could like this but it really isn’t for me. Everything is just… it hurts my brain in some places so I can’t continue reading.
I love reading your book! However, I couldn't quite understand the description of the characters, the background, and there were a few grammar problems as well. I suggest some proofreading and your book will be better! I'll be adding this book to my collection to see if you do better!
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your story is something, I like to read to be honest, I would like to see how far it will grow.
so far there not else to talk about for now until futher more chapter's have been read.
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Wow, This story is amazing! I loved the first chapter, The fight scene and the cut to it being a commercial was a clever hook! Rpg-based novels are one of my favorite genres, so I’ll be reading this for the long run!
I've been trying to find the raw mtl for it for hours and I cant web novel are really hiding it well done ????I'll keep searching tho I won't give up
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