Hi I'm the author, I just re-released the rewrite. I don't know the best way to do it, so I delete all the previous chapters. It seems a bit buggy in the app, so you need to keep scrolling to the right to find the new chapters.
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The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!
Overall, the chapter structure is quite neat and organized. It was a pleasant experience for me as a reader. Additionally, the story is quite detailed, and I find myself learning a lot while reading it.
Every character didn't have much exposure, but I guess that is how this webnovel is taking its path with the main character as the focus of everything. Or perhaps it is because it is a first-person type story? I don't know, but it is still an enjoyable read for me despite the moderate pace.
A sophisticated novel by a sophisticated man for sophisticated gentlemen.
Just get past the info dumps, and you'll be surprised by what you find.
Sigh. 40k views and 1 review ? C'mon guys. Do your dear author a favor and help her out won't ya? I took it upon myself to review this book in place of all of its readers. Do your best Ms. author!
The novel is Fun to read. It Grabs hold of you and makes you want to read more. A simply a great work. A enjoyable read you don't wanna miss out on:)
Oriental fantastic romance story, hope to read more about the girl with the first young man love story. I am very interesting in the Chinese Kongfu
The dialogue between characters is flismy and not the best, and I just made this review because I dislike our MC's mother.
Out of 3 of the novels I have read from this author(Otherworldly Cultivator, Zhang Fei and Primordial Dual Cultivator Dragon), I consider this one the best. Second being Zhang Fei. I feel this novel has more refined elements (Here I mean it has been revised many times) than his other works. I feel this is a GREAT READ. To the Author: I really appreciate that you write 3 novels together with Daily Updates on them. Great Work.
Solid quality, frequent updates, unique world.KINKY AF.
It's a good story, will be waiting for future updates!????
this story grabbed me and kept me entertained from the first chapter. if the author gets published I will be buying their novels.