Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it.
Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.
Keep on writing, I want more of this.
Any news on the release schedule in the future? Noticed it's been a few weeks since the last chappy. Great story, so interested in hearing about the future of this story.
These are short stories that on equal parts cater to the guilty pleasures of the readers but also manage to run a chill down your spine and make you hold your breath while reading.
The title of the book does not lie - All these stories focus about love that it a little strange, a little disturbing. Sometimes just in the eyes of society, sometimes downright criminal.
It is nothing for the faint-hearted and some chapter should maybe get a trigger warning.
But here I am, marvelling at how the author again managed to play with my emotions. So fellow readers, read at your own discretion. You are in for a ride;-)
Just because I want to read more of this and to let this 'story' become more popular. I know it's a biased rating. But what can I say, I have got a refined taste if I do say so myself.
Good story but no continuation from the author. What a pity
Overall a Good story. I sense there is still a lot more world building hidden and the character of Non human with couple of bloodlines brings a fresh breath in this genre. Hope the Author Drakal continues to make it more interesting. Grammar and structure is alright and the switch between POV is also not that jarring.
good
The story is like every other xanxia. Same underestimated mc, weak to strong, etc. The writing is terrible. Need editing. For example, it take 10 paragraphs to describe something that could be done in 1 or 2. Very wordy, repetitive, bad grammar, run on sentences, typos and wrong choice of words (vocabulary).
I had to drop this after a dozen chapters.
Warning!!!!!
this novel is a fcking lie.
why u may ask? ive read till chp 40 and then when i proceed to go to read the mtl in mtlnovel*com and just about to read, i accidently read the comment and from what i see..... well let say its not looking pretty good.
this novel start as a true misunderstanding novel till the author changed script and abruptly make the sect mc joins into a real hidden and all powerful sect.
the author abruptly change the sect leader into a real mahayana realm cultivator and all the 7 disciples into (real)high realm cultivators.
if the sect is truly an expert sect would the sect master be frugal and so poor? will he sell all his possessions and mc painting for money if they r truly expert sects? would they even fear not paying the inferior spirit stones at the early chp?
i quote from the readers comment " this novel is disapointing. you can fool the characters, but don't you try fool the readers. Turns out they aren't pretending to be experts ,but real experts from the start."
I'll also post a screen shot from a commenter in the web .
like this review so it can rise to top review to let many people know
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