What would you do if you had a book that told you how to get the love of your life? Teenage emotions, what can you really do. it's a feeling that just happens.Henry is a high schooler that really needs a book like that cause he is hopeless in love.
Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriah really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji
Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.
Well I'm leaving a review on my own book ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
About 6 chapters left, I've written 3 I'll upload them soon. Thanks for sticking with me till the end ❤️