He unkillable soul or body that broken >_> I read it in raw
I was really enjoying the novel but the translation quality dropped drastically after the free chapters.Though not unreadable it's still very disappointing
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until now it look very good story and novel. hope it will be pick up, and we can really enjoy it, and i want to highly recommend 1 of the beast taming novel : Lord of Pets. so addicted and don't let you stop reading, give it a try :)
Ohhhh mah goaj So-s-so much FILL-f-filler. No but seriously what is all this filler? Nai.ve mc with no logic at friggin all like bruh. 140140140140140140140140140
Only read about 15 chapters till now but I agree with the others. There are tons of trash writers wannabes, writing terrible novels and they still getting 4.2 or more ratings. Keep writing man, you are doing a fantastic job. If I have to find something, I'd say that you do a little better intro, however (at least for now) you are at the top 10 in my mind. Keep up the good work!
I’m only on chapter 12, but….. this book has been and looks like it will be the book that I have been waiting for. Years have gone by and this is basically the book that I have been hoping and dreaming would one day be written. I love it. I’ll write another review later on the actual writing and how the book ends up but I had to put this out there with how excited I was
started decent but multiple things ruin it
1 inconsistencies - MC refering to female characters as he etc annoying
2 the reason for the dungeons to appear just stupid - god lost interest, by putting in the god to your novel it removes any form of progression that MC could achieve through effort for example if you wrote a novel where you train day in day out to develop great power and strength then superman with 0 weaknesses and immortal turns up all efforts seems pointless
3 the reasons for demons desire to conquer utterly ridiculous - they know their greatest enemy could wipe them out with a thought yet still think they are high level beings
The story draws you in at the first part, and immidately when it starts, potential is seen in this book.
Seem like this is one dropped.. have been waiting for quite a long time.. thought I have added it on my library. there is no updates. Really sad to see this one is over as well.