Rebirth of Gu Jiao

I went out of my way to write a full review for this story, because I felt like it had a lot of potential, decent plot idea, and the author can improve significantly.Writing Quality is a bit disappointing.  "Show, don't tell" is a cornerstone of writing.  There are lots of explanations for everything with info dumps, instead of a slow but steady discovery.  Various descriptions are awkward many times as well.  In addition, there are a number of typos.  I honestly just expect more from a premium novel.Author updates regularly, which is great.Story development feels pretty basic.  Nothing groundbreaking or new.  There's a system.  Someone has transmigrated.  Theres a tournament arc.  Etc.  It doesn't pull me in because I feel like I've seen it all before.  For a world that is being invaded, it doesn't feel like it at all.  Everyone seems too casual about it all.  Normal people just living their lives casually when the world is falling apart around them.  We had a global pandemic where people were dying from covid, and things changed everywhere.  I can't imagine monsters invading, and people just acting like martial arts are just "sports" anymore.  You give little to no impression about how society has changed from this.Character design is a little boring.  I wish that there was a little more character development.  Everyone other than the MC feels a bit two dimensional.  Even the MC sometimes feels a bit boring.  I don't know how you plan to bring character growth to the MC either since he was already an adult, and he is doing the same thing he was doing in his previous life.  There needs to be personal growth for the characters, otherwise you result in a Xianxia novel where everyone is rigid and unreasonable.World background also got 3 stars because there is nothing new about a world being invaded by monsters.

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Below is concept art of Emma the fox girl that first appeared in CHAPTER 003. Before writing, I have always liked to draw. Thus, will try to add more arts in the future.

-Yes there are multiple dragon bloodline but i won't tell you whose , find them yourself you have 3 chances !

"It's fine, you guys are probably gonna get it soon as well," Jay laughed, waiting for the day they get trolled by the spirit in their brain too. But truth be told, Aurora was a huge help. If she's a devil, then let it be. In the face of death, survival is king. Becoming a killer? Signing soul away to a devil? Doesn't matter what the social justice warriors would say, but only those that survive get to talk.