Alright in all honesty the book is okay, but the mc is so unbelievably insufferable that it’s truly hard to deal with. Writing the review at chapter 49. Really hoping it gets better.
I have not been more confused on the stupidity of an author than the time I read the Communist Manifesto. The author’s inability to create a good Mc has left me with many questions. The world that the story takes is an amazing background for character development, even more so sense the use of stats literally means constant progression should be a thing. But as I read further I have found myself sincerely wishing for the MC to die a horribly death by Rabbit horn impalement. The MC has the intelligence of a retarded goldfish and has displayed no ability or courage whatsoever. Even his own AI helper thinks he’s stupid and will often make it known. Seriously, Author , please increase his IQ by at least 60.
Can anyone explain why the author stopped writing? I'm dying of suspense here. You finally found a unique story, only to be left out in the cold. dude more chapters please.
It's a fun adventure story, the characters are good and some are ridiculous like Gaffin. I like story with adventure genre like this, cause i like adventure. Good story for adventure and thriller lover.
I would give this novel a decent rating for the story but the word in the story need to increase.
When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it's a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it's very fresh,
Keep going!
too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;.
Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5
it is a great book and the write really knows what their doing
This novel is trash. Ive said this before but these type of stories are like mainstream rap music. Peerless females, huge wealth, and killing(through underworld or something) Containing no logic and MC can never do no wrong and always excessively praised. There will always be CN like this.
There was a novel like this in the previous trial as well. I did not think ill see one again so soon
I have to admit though, I like how the Author write his ecchi scenes are naturally but too much bs
How did this get picked??? The reviews are less. So are the top fans??? Webnovel just picking what they want!! So whats the point of trial read????