Have read through 25 chapters, the novel has a check in system novel but the MC is different, funny and isn’t a generic copy like all the other check in novels. The story seems kind of interesting too. Characters also don’t feel too one dimensional as compared to the other check in novels. Highly recommend everyone to read before giving a one star review.
World of cultivation, strong prey weak and our main character got a deal in his dantain. He got system and many other powerful resource. This little bad since many character is given so much resources from start but if author explain it well then it will be a good novel
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I'm glad this story got continued, I had read it before and I find the whole thing interesting. I hope the author can keep up the good work. It was I nice story to read especially when you like fantasy type genre.
After around more than half a year of writing this novel, I'm still at Volume 2 of what I planned to do in this novel. That's why to ease those who are still on the fence whether to pick this up or not, I will be listing the Pros and Cons of what you should expect if you ever decide to try or pick this book up.
Cons
-Harem(This is a Pro and Con. Why did I list it here? Because some will surely see it as rushed since some information about the Harem Members weren't revealed until later in the story. Though you can spoil yourself at one of the auxiliary chapters.)
-One Perspective. (Everything will be in the MC's perspective. Like I've written in my not-so-shameless review months ago. You might find it limited since you can only see the world as it unravels before MC's eyes and you will only be privy to his thoughts and guesses about the other characters. I never switched perspective and it will stay that way until I finish this)
-Confusing First Chapters? (I don't think this as a con really. But if you start reading, you'll see numerous comments about readers who thought they already know the entire story from the decision the MC did or how the characters interacted with him. There isn't a established world yet so don't expect everything will be explained in it. If that puts you off as well, then this is in the right category. Anyways…)
Pros
-Harem (As I have said, this is also a pro. None of those who joined his harem will be forgotten and they are all important to the story. They will grow along the MC and the ones he will mainly support.)
-Weak to Strong (You will see how he grows from the bottom up to the point that he's already stronger than most of the Heroes, not only through the stats but also for his versatility. Still he will stick to his role most of the time as the Ultimate Support but if it comes to it, he could step up and try to end the battle as soon as possible or drag it until his opponent reveals a weakness. He's not someone who will fight a losing battle when he's already strong enough. So expect that he'd only either win a fight or retreat when things will not result in a win after a dragged out battle.)
-Well-structured Power Levels (I can say that I put a lot of thought to every world's Cultivation Pathway. Each of them are detailed enough to stand on their own for someone to reach the Transcendent Realm but at the same time, they're all closely related. As of the current chapter, there are five established Pathways and you will see the MC cultivate each of them from scratch or at least until the 3rd one.)
-MC's Mysterious Identity (You wouldn't see him as someone who has a grand goal of becoming the strongest in the whole universe, his goals might seem unclear for now because of his identity being an ongoing mystery. And that will be slowly unraveled throughout the story. You will probably read some of the theories put out by readers if you delve deep enough in the story. And of course, it will not stay that way. His real identity will soon be revealed before the step up to the next stage of the story.)
I guess this is all for now. I will add more if I see that I missed something but I still have more chapters to write so, you can be the judge of your own. Hate or Like the story and the characters, I will give you that judgement. Just don't start attacking an author personally if you don't like what you read. It's easy to drop a book and not be a prick. Constructive criticisms are welcome and I will answer to them if they're reasonable enough.
When this novel reached one year old, I will create another review.
What a great novel.
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Honestly this book lacks soul, or in simpler terms it's very mechanical and doesn't flow well, the conversations are extremely stiff and boring.
character personality are pretty bad and sloppy.
I was excited to read a new romance book where the mc is male but sadly this isnt really a novel it feels more like a script there no emotion and the character themselves He Fang and the mc are extremely boring and have basically no personality
The story is amazing, and fresh the characters suit well with the story, the writing is good too, but there were errors like punctuation errors that were breaking the flow of sentences and some grammatical mistakes and minor typography mistakes if the author works on these he'll kill it..
Best of luck author you're doing great
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What's up, everyone. I really love this story. Took me months to write and edit it. But I was patient and dealt with it. It's pretty big too. Hopefully, you'll like it as much as I did.
Ps. It's a dark fantasy, so obviously there'll be blood. Muahahaha!
I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK! I recommend it to you. It is a fantasy/thriller/action genre. I love how the author made us of literature especially the culture of some countries like Philippines in terms of horror stories. The way the story started in the asylum while the characters are looking for way to escape the said place and encountering slaughterers along the way is so epic and thrilling!