"...and then your brain will melt, oozing out of your nose. YOUR NOSE! So let me down, damn it!"
"The above three are all innate characteristics of a human body and cannot be altered in any way possible.
be in his hands?
simple plain i dont like attitude of girls around mc and mc attitude .Not my cup of tea
This is an incredible cultivation novel without face slapping and the cruelty that come in almost all the cultivation novel on this site.the only negative point is the development of the story is soo slow.
Ce livre est génial. j'ai adoré le développement de l'histoire.
A unique take where Allen the Mc, is the demon emperor in the game. I do like it, but it’s unfortunate that Allen and his demon wives don’t get to have equipment drops from unaliving enemies nor do they get the double exp like players in special events.Grammar is ok, character development is coming along. My main issue is the situation with the ex who cheated on Mc. Allen already met with her, they hashed it out. He rejected her and is moving on with his in game wives to irl. For some odd reason, the author keeps forcing the Sophia situation. 400+ chapters and she’s still in the picture. Chapters are dedicated to her and her simps when they def could’ve been used to flesh out Allen’s relationships with his seven wives.I mentioned how obvious and forceful these tedious situations were and the author responded by using Amber Heard as an example. Apparently, she’s now accusing Jason Mamoa of something. When I read that response, I sat there in disbelief for a moment, bc what?!? That’s your justification for dragging out this nonsense? Welp, just as I exited myself from reading anything Amber related(bc that too was dragged too long), I am exiting this novel. A shame too bc I really enjoyed Allen and his women. Good luck in your writing endeavors. ✌?
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
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Of course, being the one who wrote this novel, I'll shamelessly give this novel full ratings before others start reviewing it ;) With regards to rating it, you can be as harsh as possible, I won't mind! I do the same in the comments when I read other novels because I enjoy the art so much. Anyways, thank you so much for reading the novel! I don't think you understand how much it means to have others enjoy something you created through your own sweat and tears. If someone who knows about formatting can help me with fixing it on here, that'd be awesome. Also, if you guys want a wiki, feel free to ask and I'll oblige. The main character is a combination of my own self but also what I dream of from a main character. Constantly evolving, actually smart, shameless, cautious, and self-critical. I also added the system because I feel like that best embodies what I wish I had in my daily life! Hopefully, this character and the way they grow is something you find enjoyable. Anyways, I know this is a bit cliche, but I really really really thank you guys for taking the time out of your day to read the novel! I'll do my best not to disappoint you. Cheers!
Good work bother noc ??The characters are pretty fun and I enjoyed reading it! My good boy Cody is the best, clearly. Ethan should be nicer >: | Sign me up as the first member of the fan club ✌?
This story will be based on the life of Maddoxx, a technically normal guy, who discovers his origins and his father past. Trying to follow his steps, while protecting friends and important people to him. Most of the time we will have mercenary missions, crazy action and even more crazy people. But if we just put characters like that they will be empty. So we will have some romance between every mercenary and his dear-half. After all guy deserves a good girl to welcome him after a tough mission.Drama is a good thing for the plot and character background. Everyone have their own **** to hide or to regret. I am not that kind of guy who forgives everything. I'm not the guy that gives a plot armor to the main character and make them immortal or some ****. Everyone dies after taking a good shot. Everyone can be killed while sleeping. This is a 'real' novel, it happens in our own world with some real facts, sometimes with real data, and i will try my best to make everything plausible. But keeping the fun of the read. What i am trying to say is that this is not a transmigration/reincarnation/System ****, this is a novel where our mc can die anytime, he is not invincible, he is not OP, and he is not dumb. Our mc likes pus***, he likes girls, he likes money, he like guns, he like his friends. I have some goddamn missions in mind, i have some incredible ideas for the plot. If you guys give me a chance, I will show all of them to you. Sorry for making it long. Enjoy.