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This story had promise. When I started reading this I expected somewhere along the lines of actual Mages training and honing on their respective realms and then eventually fuse or enhance the realms. The start of the novel was great up until the girl decided she wanted to tag along.I was fine with this to an extent until the author had to force the MC out of gaining experience from traveling in the wilderness. The author then inserted some stupid decisions that made some important figure help him on deaths door after a dumb conflict that could have been avoided. after that the MC just starting a training montage for a long time...again.What really made me quit this novel is when I realized after he went strolling through a city the whole story devolved into a ****ty xianxia novel With the retarded MC being overprotective of woman and angry noble sons because of MC interfering. I expected more but I guess I should not expect too much on this kind of site.The girl that tags along the MC just ruins the novel. The problem is not having a girl tag along. THE problem is how to author presented her. It's like the author is trying so hard to make her a ML but fails at it way too much.
Alright! I made this account to just post my personal view and opinion so you might have different thoughts from mine and that's fine! So try reading it first! -------------------------------Review: I love it! Overall, the characters felt great and the parts where we get a bit of their backstory which hit me perfectly was great! It was kind of getting bad when Natan became overworked because of the butchery job he was tasked with (which i felt really bad for) and Bryson was now the focus of the story for a while, but it didnt last TOO long so it was fine, but I wanted to see more of Natan being developed since he was a good character. It's fine with the "Bryson likes Minori but Raisa likes Bryson." but no progress is made ( which is still fine ). I am really rooting for Bryson and Natan to get their fated one and excited on how it'll turn out! Again, I love this unique story! Keep it up! ❤❤❤
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I have nothing against bl. I love the genre. But this story needs an editor really bad. And there's a lot of confusion. There isn't enough detail to fully understand things.
This book is a hidden masterpiece! Although it's not satisfactory for short-readers that don't really. I like sophisticated much but for me, I do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to reduce your point. The characters might need some development since it's lackadaisical but I can handle it. I gave it 5 stars since I do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4-star rating! Anyways go on writing and upgrading. Your grammar, tenses, and vocabulary need to be something that everyone understands, That's for your book to be more engaging!
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it sound really good i hope i enjoy it but you can not drop half way,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Another novel worthy of spending my time..... And the MC is from India...... Hehe...... Love kingdom building novel aso please suggest me some more of that..... Hehe....... Will be following this..... Thanks for the novel author San......