Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.
don't know why author made the MC become so stupid and not realize about a lot of logic things that happened. Bottom line the story is below average.
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You want to read modern novel then this is not for you. this is a fantasy genre, even the tags says so......................................
Incredible!, the story's plot is horrifying, the story is descriptive, and the characters are so real. This is a good story, in my opinion. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you, author.
All I can say is that a few chapters in and I almost died from how mentally retarted the protagonist is...
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Thos novel is pretty nice, the Character Development is solid. The obly problem is thst its getting kinda boring.
Humiliated
Breakthrough
Faceslap
Its a Endless circle, with no interesting plot.
What is even more sad is that the Mc just learns new technics but doesnt do anything on his own, the plot armor is so strong that even a chicken could be the emporer.
Dont want to be mean but thats it
It’s basically 'The Charm of Soul Pets', but without a story. The pets were switched for the nearest thing (moon fox -> moon wolf), the hardwork for a system and everything in general is worse : the translation, the stakes, the world building, the size, etc…
To give you an example, in TCoSP, the MC will die if he doesn’t get strong enough. In this story: no university… That’s not exactly on the same level. You can apply this comparison to everything in general.
Now, I give it a fairly bad review, but it is still redeable. I’d rather recommend you 'The Charm of Soul Pets', 'Astral Pet Store' or 'Museum of Deadly Beasts' over this, but if you’ve already read them and aren’t into rereading stories like me you can go for it. It’s more of a low priority read than a no-read. Imma continue but I probably won’t finish it.
I read almost the whole story (200 chapters) when it was free the other day. At first I didn’t like it but kept at it because it was free and somewhat interesting premise. Things get better in later chapters or maybe I only got used to the fact that something will happen to threaten the colony every so often and they are going to get lucky and/or work hard and make tough decisions to make it through. Probably the characters are the best part because of their flaws.
Anyone know the original name/site?
At this point, I’m only going to be reading novels that don’t have the entire plot in the title.
Thats all i wanted to say really, was bored and felt like i should put that out there. Also i get Exp i think, so i have that going for me.
Also wondering if Authors read their own novel after its done? Or they just find that tedious, I know i would. Like they spent ALOT of time writing and re-editing it, they know the plot, they know whats going to happen. No reason to read it again….I was going somewhere with this….oh well.
Have a great day/night everyone, dont get covid or hurry up and get better already. Also some of you need to go outside and touch some grass.