Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile.And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him.And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar .All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
I love how there is more than one book off of the original! I am a foodie so this of course is a pleasure to read for the food also! Mmm! I also enjoy seeing the obscure characters from the other two books take on a whole life & love of their own!
I like it! Gives the feeling of Terror Infinity novel!
Ah, classic. I’ve also had this happen to me before, the only difference being that no one told me that it was an escape show... I’m still waiting for them to tell me that, but until then, I’ve got to keep running from the cops.
is there is hareem ,hope not cz i hate it ? is mc cold and ruthless or he forgive his female enemy cz she's pretty or he helps every one that he meets and spend ressources and time just for someone he just met ihope there's non from the above cz im just sick of those novels
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GOLD!!! Non harem werewolf story. Just action, and no stupid filler romance. Let's gooooo
Nice story. Cant keep it down. Worth my coins. I recommended for those that love mixture of intense romance, action and a bit of magic[img=recommend]
bs no lo recomiedo
Is this story made by a single author? It's more like there's a couple of authors here, taking turns doing each paragraph - with only the vaguest knowledge of what each other is doing. This means there's going to be a beauty introduced every chapter. The protagonist's parents are going to be alive the next, and supposed dead for 3 years the next chapter. Oh, his sibling also regularly changes gender and names.
This batch of trial-read has been...utterly terrible.
translation quality is trash,what the hell is translator doing,mtl translation is much better then this trash,if you dont want to provide readers quality translation its much better to give this project to someone else
Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.
First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.
Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.
Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.
Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural.
Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.
Overall I'm liking the story so far.