this is very good. I hope the story continues : . .
Honestly, this is a great novel. I really like the writing and the characters. I did not expected me to enjoy it this much. Good work, keep it up.
Peltivierre makes the daring choice to kick of this series with action at the start instead of a more subtle character introduction scene. Since there are so many elements to introduce in the beginning, showing the story by narrating how the MC became a hunter may have been a more effective way to gather the interest of the readers. Unfortunately even after starting the series, the chapters only consist of non-stop action from chapter to chapter instead of focusing anything on character-building, world-building, or story development.
There are a number of grammatical errors where past and present tense are mixed up, which is quite jarring. There are also some instances of throwing in future tense as well.
One way to improve this series would be to incorporate more imagery, describing the various sensations the MC is feeling. It would also help to describe his emotions and feelings in detail, so readers could connect to him more.
Since the MC spends a lot of time, more detail could go into describing survival in the wilderness. Thus far, it’s heavily glossed over.
Although this series starts up decently, it quickly comes to show it has nothing but action to substantiate it. I don't know how it changes later on, but it lacks a lot of substance.
This is a GEM. I didn’ expect much but the mc is:
Smart
Strong
Cool abilitys
No simp or dense idiot
Nc variety of girls
Nc goal
It’s by far one of the best harem story’s I’ve read And I read a lot of trash harem with beta and simp.
I really loved the start of the book. It's very creative and author did really good job with the world building. Now i don't know what else i should write but if you are new reader then please check it out.
Bruh webnovel should be careful, what if someone tells Disney ??. Like this is such a dog water move ?. it's not even a good fanfic. I wouldn't recommend.
Heavenly excrement! The cover is so nice! Just from looking at it, I can tell that this book will be great. Dear author, please write that scene in the future! I'll pay big bucks for it!
This book is a hidden gem and I'm glad I've found one! As a fan of Lord of the Mysteries I'm extremely happy that I've found another book set in a victorian era. Also it's very refreshing to see someone go away from cliché system-harem plot (it's very refreshing to NOT see them in the book, especially as a dedicated webnovel reader who started reading before the whole system shtic appeared). The writing is very well paced and structured, characters are interesting to read about and the comedy is great! What else do you need from books?)) I definitely recommend to read this one and get it to the top ?
not bad good writing, it's just weirdly heavy with all the secondary knowledge, I find myself just skipping the unending descriptions on things and especially the politics and schemes, they just kinda happen by front loading copious amounts of exposition and expecting people to follow along with the convoluted nonsense, also I think you went to big to quickly introducing universe level concepts before he barely steps out of his first sect is a good way to burn yourself out and the readers, overall meh I read it a little at a time when other novels are updating
Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
I just got a bit confused with the names