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This is another transmigration into a role-playing video game where the MC knows what will happen in the future. The twist is the MC transmigrate as an NPC that can also level up and learn skills like a player. It is still unclear if players will be introduced into the story or how smart the MC is at utilizing his foresight, but so far, it's not a bad story. No face slapping, stuck-up girl or young master in the first 15 chapters.
This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets.
Even tho it's not a bad modern day xianxia it can't free itself from the cliches. It did start good but i feel like the quality dropped pretty quickly afterwards... Also the seemingly low iq of mc doesn't really help the novel... Well, all in all it's still readable to pass time but it sure ain't a masterpiece ^_^
i can give cause meet the expectations of tge genre. .but even though dual cultivation novel but flirting with many women together is looking bad for character ...other dual cultivation novel do have same thing but popular one do this type more greatly. ..i think you should give more time in developing many women together more refinely ....but i have to say still pretty awesome work
trashy writing because it always change's the names of some character like green moth to blue moth can you make some sense? well overall plot is good
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I really like the story ! Its not the typical cultivation webnovel with young masters and jade Beauties.
The cultivation world is good explained no loopholes or op supreme cultivation technique at the start or some op cheat.
Perfect mc who isn't stupid and uses his brain and is not walking around and offending everyone.
Hope the Author continue this story and doesn't stop the story midway really liked it till now.
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Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS!
Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level.
Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do.
And if you like to, you can check it out
To be sincere, this is an actually good book. I love the main character, and the way the overall story is developing. I'm looking forward to more amazing chapters author, keep up the good work.
Good.
Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you
