This indeed is a great sci-fi, an amazing alien-tech story. Just the chapter one was enough to get me drawn into the story. Keep it up our dear author.My review is that you should work more on the writing quality, most times, the dialogues meant to be in (") are not. Apart from that, the story is amazing
Within the first chapter you can tell how much work the author built into the world building. The characters also actually act how they are meant to act which is an issue you see in some other novels. The only issue you could possibly have is that there are some grammar issues but the author gets better with it as it continues. But it really is one of the most world built system novels I have ever read.
So i Guess i wasted my time? Reading the first two chaps with ranks and stuff. the thing that ruined It for me is her yep her Plus i feel like its just gunna get worse with 2 main charcters the author has to have Them grow from experince which would Mean double the work but then again what experinCes wOuld they grow from? I give up but yall check it out and see for yourself dont mind me.
iam coming to support this novels hahahahaahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
The whole point of this novel is that the mc is OP but he doesn't know it and thinks that he is weak because he didn't cultivate/learn combat arts, while everybody else is afraid of or respectful to him because he can freely use the power of 'rules'. Nobody mentions him being OP while in his presence because they think he wants to experience the life of a mortal, thus develops the misunderstanding that the whole novel is based on.
So this is my first novel and I want to be shameless but I will be serious with it and I hope you give it a chance
This novel is Great and the mc has a consistent personality with him being evil although I say the cultivation is sometimes a little to fast with him getting to the next level in 2 chapters. Also, this is novel doesn't have a harem or any romance.
Idea is great. but authir has not done a good job potraying it.
Too much random stuff and veRy unnatural. lots of things seem very hapazardLy put together because the author has a thought.
Very stupid things happen which is very unecessary. and soo much that can be done is not done.
Please wrote down a defLtails of an arc and then start writiNg chapters. not whatever one feels like At the moment.
This author has good imagination! :D
Story is interesting! Recommended to read.
I will continue to support this book! Cheerio!
Have a nice day!
Story outline is in point and i reLy libe the characteRs. The authoR has a really good imagination with thos one. wonder what new rad or twist to betwll
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This is a really good book and I like the characters ( cause their personalities and the shit they do are pretty relatable) but if he’s streaming I think it would be great if you just give some highlights of the games like you’re currently doing and if we have fight scenes in the near future don’t extend it for like 7 chapter (like some other books I know of) as it would be a major turnoff. The pace is good and he’s not hunting for pok-cough I mean women so that’s nice. I think there should be a little more world background as we don’t know much about it but it’s nice to read overall and easy on the eyes.