Summary: MC is originally a genius, but is kicked out of clan after his cultivation stagnates, and survives assassination attempts from within the clan. He's a transmigrator, and gets a system that returns a multiple times better object than anything he auctions off. Starts an auction house and proceeds to power up off of the returns of the auction system, around chapter 100 he's back to seek revenge.
My opinion: this is only worth killing time if you can't find anything higher quality.
- There are annoying holes in the plot, e.g. where is the MC getting objects from to auction --- if he re-auctions anything the system gave him as a reward, he won't get another reward from it? He builds his reputation on regularly auctioning high quality, rare objects, for cheap ... but where is his supply chain?
- More chapters are spent in the auction house, describing objects we will never encounter again in repetitive detail, describing the facial expressions and feelings and conversations of the bidders, and detailing the sales process for each item in each auction... than chapters are spent on the actual events that move the plot forward.
- The plot is clearly being stretched out with unnecessary complications and machinations (the MC thinking he's being clever by constructing an elaborate revenge plot) around the time I'm writing this review (on chapter 118).
- The translation of an occasional sentence is completely nonsensical in an annoying way that lets you know that no one edited the chapters. Or sometimes the last words of a sentence is missing.
I don't recommend this one. Stay away.
Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find mistakes while reading it.
wew too much communism and a dumb MC even the joke is stale,
and bringing someone to the real world(storm) is kinda trash, the author is already started thinking with his d
I liked it a lot, a shame it's not updated more
Can u change it with third point of view? And it will be perfect..
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Honestly just cant enjoy fully with first point of view..
A very good book , I read all the chapters at once .
Hope there will be more soon .
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I dont know if what I red is real or not but when i accidentally pressed a random chapter its like the mc became a she can someone explain to me what happened cause i might drop this as i am not into gender bender stuff...
Only two chapters so far so review might need to be changed in the future.
So far the story is really weird, the prologue chapter gave some interesting information that helped pique my interest but the actual first chapter felt like it was narrated by a teenage boy going through puberty. It was just all over the place
Thank you for your new novel, I came here through your other novel "Apex System”. The VRMMORPG Genre is one of my favorites and your new novel is up to a very interesting start.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender.
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This is good cultivation novel. I like the idea that the mc is the first cultivator and he slowly explore the cultivation path and his own self.
There’s no question ten out of ten story it’s background update stability writing everything’s perfect but I would like to get chapters faster