Okojus
????? very good really enjoyed it waiting for me badly enjoyrd it ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺do upload as soon as possible keep the goid content up
So far it is a very good read. I must say the 5 ch/wk is a bit meh but I also am greedy. The story itself seems well written so far and the writer seems to have a real sense of proportion and weight which is quite unique. I am very interested so far.
At first I thought that I had finally found a normal Chinese novel, but the longer I read the worse it got. First, from the polite hero, they make the next destroyer of sects who immediately promises to kill not his opponent, but to cut out his entire sect. Then some time restrictions begin, which the author introduced just to add cheats to the main character. Well, how could I forget about stupid dialogues, where the main character says that “he had never seen such a cool mastery of the sword”, I’m wondering, but he has something to compare with? He is from our world and not from the world of martial arts. Why do they constantly translate all garbage, and not for example Legend of the Cultivation God (https://***.novelupdates.com/series/legend-of-the-cultivation-god/) or Legend of the Great Saint (https: // ***.novelupdates.com/series/legend-of-the-great-saint/)
Author! How is the issue of romance in the work? Is he spending more time with the girls? Did he marry them? And do you have any Discord links?
the fact that it wasnt necessary to constantly challange the MCs actions, and that out of the 4 developed characters in the story so far, all of them are independant,unpredictable and intelligent so far, is justification enough that this novel is better than nearly everything in the past month. it also has an actual translator.first 20 chapters, has comedy elements, scheming, politics, no action as of yet, the mc isnt ur japanese haram mc, system doesnt seem overly OP, refreshingly every chapter isnt about what level people are or cultivation infofingers crossed, pretty good, kind of similar to martial kings retired life, dont know if it will stay consistent however
No recommended...30 chapter before 40 chapter wasting time...the author cannot make the story interesting in first 40 chapter and only make reader angry and lost interest to story...so I drop it...
The dialogue between characters is flismy and not the best, and I just made this review because I dislike our MC's mother.
ending is rushed otherwise great novel ..
The novel is great until a gold digger bit.ch shake her unwanted breast to attract MC's attention. Minus or kill that bit.ch I will give a 5 star.
man, so much of content, waiting for some clashing...
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
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