The story is exciting and there so much to look forward to, on the story. I particularly like the names of the characters. Thought, on the earlier chapter, it would be a great addition if you could somehow describe each important characters appearance like you did with Miss Megan.
this story is now among my top 5, top 3 even if it has more chapters, in just words the story is beyond
the author is back, thats great!!. I just came back to webnovel and saw on my library.
I've read just 6 chapters of this book and I can tell that it's gonna be fun and enjoyable for sure! It has a good opening, the more I read, the more intensely fun it got. And overall, it's quite entertaining, but on the other hand, I also think that the storyline is a little slow in progression, but not that bad. BTW, I will wait for the next updates :D
the 1st half of the novel was good but I don't know what happened afterwards because author focuses on making has many fillers chapters has possible and entire chapter can be summarised in to 2 line. author is doing everything possible to squeeze has much money from his paid readers
Haven't read it yet but It looks good from the first chapter, I'll save it till chapters are stockpiled.
Reviewed up to chapter 8. The writing quality is on the rough side. The POV switches mid-scene - however, this does seem to be a trend on Webnovel in general -, the pros don't quite flow, and there are grammar errors peppered throughout. However, the writing quality improves dramatically after the first two chapters.The story is paced well. While fast, it allows time to set up the relationship between the main characters, their situation, and their initial goals before getting thrown into the plot. While the character descriptions are in "blocks" the characters themselves have personalities. Beyond some of the dialogue being on the janky side, the characters have unique voices. And I do appreciate the relationship between the leads. It's obvious they care about each other. The world has some unique qualities to it. It's obvious that the writer is well versed in a range of anime and pop culture, and that shows in the world-building. :)
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Grammar is rough is some patches but overall enticing beginning. I got insta hooked and will keep this story in my library. I recommend trying it out especially if you like reincarnation of the strongest sword ______ (forgot the title either god or emperor). Either way op mc with op abilities. Can't wait for future chapters
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Well, this was an interesting read. I don't often read horror stuff like this, but it was good enough for me to want more! The writing quality is really good, and I'm rather shocked that someone can have all these nightmares. But, you should read to find out for yourself. A great find
This doesn't have any consistency and can can be very confusing to the reader such as how or when did the MC get that weapon/item or power etc.