Okojus
I'm back for the reboot and it is better than it was before
This book is absolutely fantastic and worth reading even though it’s been dropped for a few years now. The irony of a book about a god creating his own super computer system ending on chapter 404 is rather amusing too lol.
While the author had an interesting concept, it is quickly lost in a pile of bad cliches. This could be forgiven if not for the poor writing and complete lack of consistency.
It has game elements and a system. MC is cunning and gives off Devil's Cage kinda vibes. His power is pretty cool too. He gets points which can make his abilities better when he eats monsters. Written really well.
Some places made me feel that translation could've been a bit better. Otherwise it's really good.
I don't usually like sect building novels due to some negatives that plague eastern fantasy novels in general such as insane plot armor.
However, the author has done a splendid job and rid the book of cliches. It is a pretty amazing read. The only qualm I had was the word count which the author increased in later chapters.
10/10 a good read. Would highly recommend.
P.S: I love the world imagery too. Gives me that comfy feeling while reading.
Guys, this is my first story and I'm deeply sorry for all the mistakes. I got really excited in making this so I kind of rushed it. Sorry about that.
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though I don't know how to feel about our dear author wanting to be spit on, I do really like this story and hope more people can come and read it to, it's been an amazing read and forms an addictive craving for more
Good book , not the best of the best but it's quite good and soon enough it will definitely get better and start unfolding all it's plots and the updates could get Better too
I am at chp 9 and totally loved this chapter : Slow dance with me. Waiting for the moment when Sarah shows them the recording. Hehehe. I must say, wonderful story out line and i ship Keagen and Freddie.. Lol.. But this story is having nothing disturbing at all. Its going good in its own way. Good Effort dear author. :)
Muito bom, gostei muito da leitura e por isso eu agradeço imensamente. É uma pena que está parado ou cancelado. Gostaria de ver o final desse Romance. Acredito que possa ser um dos melhores que já li.Obrigado novamente!
