Melondaomaster9
I really like this book it's so amazing??? But I kinda wish you would post more but that is just me being selfish.
wish it was being continued. it has good character development. it also moves fast enough to keep you from getting bored. .
If you wait or have always wanted to see a dark and serious Harry welcome you will like the story, a great fanfic that makes sense and has space for much history and mainly evolution of characters mainly in Harry.
sounds like death note hopefully even half as good as death note.i have a lions game on saturday and the blazers and win it in game time zone
I love the plot and the story, even thoughI don't like the complete death of danny, the masked saber (expecting that he will somehow make come back). But I do have a doubt why the MC is designed in a way that he wants to tell everyone his secrets even after he was abandoned, and his brother was backstabbed. It's like he's ignoring the basic human trait of mistrust and suspicion.
i like it very much but its to long to update...waiting for it to finish
I am here to inform abt mistake on my side, actually a series of chapters has been repeated unknown to my knowledge an error seems to have occurred in the [Timer Publishing system] I have addressed this issue to WN, but unfortunately, already published chapters can't be removed sry guys ?I will re-arrange the stock pile as soon as possible!
this is a great story and had amazing character development. my only complaint is it hasn't been updated in 5 months. I am desperate for more chapters
It’s basically 'The Charm of Soul Pets', but without a story. The pets were switched for the nearest thing (moon fox -> moon wolf), the hardwork for a system and everything in general is worse : the translation, the stakes, the world building, the size, etc…To give you an example, in TCoSP, the MC will die if he doesn’t get strong enough. In this story: no university… That’s not exactly on the same level. You can apply this comparison to everything in general.Now, I give it a fairly bad review, but it is still redeable. I’d rather recommend you 'The Charm of Soul Pets', 'Astral Pet Store' or 'Museum of Deadly Beasts' over this, but if you’ve already read them and aren’t into rereading stories like me you can go for it. It’s more of a low priority read than a no-read. Imma continue but I probably won’t finish it.
This book is like my daily breakfast. I literally look forward to each daily release and is the first book I read for the day. Even though the ML is gifted through the system he is mature and responsible and believes in fulfilling his responsibilities to his country and friends. He grows quickly and so do the demons and he always has a good share of stronger and stronger people to kill and make him stronger. There are quiet a few females around him and he has been honest till date and I am looking forward to knowing who will be the FL.Keep it up Xiao Bai and take care of your health.
This one is truly one of the best ones in the last several series. at least to this point of the novel. I truly hope that it would be picked.
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