three arm shadow

An extremely well written story. A real quality work. But, there needs at least 10chaps/day for it to truly be perfect ?.....,................................,.................. .......

So far, I'm really enjoying the story even though most characters are one-dimensional. It's still fun overall. However, the name changes are annoying. Victor is now Achilles. Lear becomes Li Er then back to Lear. Sometimes, dialogues seem to be attributed wrongly. It's disruptive and incredibly irritating.

wish it was being continued. it has good character development. it also moves fast enough to keep you from getting bored.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  .

So far a great story, the mc is a newb exploring a world because of a fanfic he read based on it. The character has the qualities of a pro in the making.

very good read. I found this story from Wattpad.

The characters are expressed nicely. The story is really interesting. Their feelings for each other and the way they care for each other I loved that. Author keep it up.....