This is a great story and I would think I have a great judge of story's. This story has a great storyline and it really pulls you in. Out of everything I think the story development is a little quick and kind of unnatural based in the circumstances that the characters have been through but other then that I think that this story has the ability to be one of the top story's on this app. Continue doing great author and you will have my support all the way to the end.
Eu gostei muita dessa história , teve um tipo de sistema que eu nunca tinha visto. Eu apenas achei q o desenvolvimento foi um pouco rápido para o meu gosto,mas vale lembrar que essa história é única.
Good Job ............... I love ur story. The English was pretty good for me, I'm pretty understand for what u want tell. I hope you will write the story become much better. And keep the story up to date though.
I'm just so glad that this isn't another cheesy sci-fi novel. It is mature, it has depth, it is dark and actually have conflict. It encourages the user to ask existential questions about his own reality and life. This book isn't for everybody. It's too good. Too good for this platform. I'm okay with the delay in uploads, a book this good requires time. Every chapter is a master piece. Take your time champ. You deserve my money.
I'm just in Chapter three but I got say great imagination author, I love the fact that it is completely futuristic and the fact that it's simplistic but interesting, it's definitely a must read for me I'd totally recommend
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I found this book 2 years ago and didn't read it because of the negative comments, thinking the story was illogical and stuff like that. I left it in one of my lists and I started reading less and less novels, until recently, I decided to find a new one. I went on this app and after looking around I found this, and after remembering it, I decided to give it a try, for real now. I don't regret it, there are some "illogical things" which become clearer later on, characters feel kinda real and development is there. [I'm chapter 145] After this much, I really like it and I kinda want there to be more chapters, cuz I'll eventually get to 300 chapters and upload speed is slow, but I don't mind it because the chapters are long enough.Hate comments aren't exactly accurate, and most of them read little part of the book, so don't trust them too much and instead give this book a try, you will like it by ch 60 of before.10/10 book[ Just to mention that LONER part of the title doesn't mean he will be alone, it's more like his mental state, he doesn't feel comfortable around others, but that doesn't mean he won't be around them. This gets more thought about later in the book.
it's kinda annoying how the author talks like hes in the past but all so the future and he restates the same thing like five times. The book isn't bad it also isn't great.
As a fan of Romance novels this is a new experience for me, this story is well thought of and the plot is quite interesting. This is my first novel of this genre and I like it a lot. keep up the good work.
Shameless Author Reviewing himself, because he really enjoys writing his novel. MC is stuck as an 5-year-old in game. It's different. When writing he can't decide what to call the game world so he left it blank. It was kind of his own stupid joke to just call it blank.
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Author's got an idea of the villian theme. It would also seem that he's quite adept with the no mercy kind not some who throw us off at the initial chapters. Keep up the good work