This chapter had me emotionally wrecked and I'm not even mad about it. Let me start with the birthday scene because that's where it all hits. The Top Supporter saying "That's because I don't have many friends" while sitting alone on a balcony with a cheap cake and an unlit candle. And He Zheng, who's been through so much, who's used to being invisible, is the one who notices. Who sees him. The way He Zheng's heartbeat speeds up before the video call connects - he knows this matters. He knows this person matters. And then the hand. That incredibly beautiful hand appearing on screen, pale and slender, the watch with silver edges. It's such a small detail but it's SO much. The Top Supporter can't show his face but he shows his hand. That's him saying I'm here, I'm real, I trust you. And He Zheng coaxing him with "Sleep, little puppy" after the livestream chaos? The tenderness in that moment is devastating. He Zheng, who's been called every name in the book, who's been told he's nothing, gets to be someone's whole world at 5 AM while it's raining in Mexico. Two lonely people finding each other across screens and time zones.
love the story but i feel like some suspense and comedy would be even better
Great writing Barbie ?? I could truly feel every emotion abs scene . Please keep on uploading xoxo ❤️❤️
This book is a game-changer! The way it expertly weaves together themes of power, loyalty, and desire is nothing short of masterful. I am already expecting a relationship that is a deliciously toxic dance of push-and-pull, and I was completely obsessed with their every interaction.
All five stars for you, author. I'm really looking forward to that drawing like a french girl. Please update moreeeeee. I'll be checking your book from time to time to check updates huhu, thank youuuu
Author hereI'll just break it down for you guys.I'm not a fan of overly described physical aspects, I prefer describing emotions and small actions that speak more than words.I like action scenes, with powers, and explosions. There's a lot of magic stuff but also physics and real world basis for everything in the story.This is not the traditional type of God plot. They don't have subjects, they don't get worshiped -at least not all the time. This is abt normal people that became Gods, they are not evil nor saints.I'm opened for discussions. I'm obsessed with using AI to create portraits of the Four Gods.
A captivating blend of rivalry, secrets, and unexpected romance, this story takes readers on an emotional journey where fate reunites two former enemies in the most dramatic way. With engaging twists, deep emotions, and a love born from chaos, it’s a must-read for fans of whirlwind romances and second chances! highly recommended.
Emotional start! you a mommy gurl or mommy boy are you Author! Story is getting interesting from chapter to chapter! Keep writing...you are not allowed to slack off! I want more chapters! DO YOU UNDERSTAND! THIS IS AN ORDER! NOT A REQUEST!
The title and description of the book dont correlate at all
THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! I'm not really a romance enthusiast but I gave this one a try and I'm currently at chapter 5 so my review contains spoilers from chapter 1-5.The main character, ovelia face hardships since the beginning. I would honestly like if we gave her non biological family a more screen time before we jumped on ovelia being sacrificed on chapter 1 as for us readers to develop our disdain and hatred to her family that mistreats her and also to characterized them well early on because I think we'll come back or they'll be introduced again later in the future, I think the first chapter is kinda fast paced but overall it's really great, her sister switched up is not something I expected but I still don't understand her intentions on befriending her in the beginning just to tease her in the end (maybe she acts like that because she's in front of her parents but she honestly care about ovelia? I don't know? I hope it's not as simple as she's just befriending her so that when it's the time she'll be used as sacrifice, she can insult her. This doesn't make sense to me. I hope she really cares about ovelia but just putting an act Infront of her parents)Also in the first chapter we can see ace human side and instantly wants to cherish ovelia like love at first sight but their first night instantly turns into horror as ace was consumed by his wolf side giving into his desires and losing common sense. I don't like the repetitive self explanation of ovelia with her fears, tho I want an explanation I also think it's too repetitive. Like "jolt down her spine" and "chills down my spine" something like that but it doesn't hurt the story imo. As ovelia wakes up we learned that when anna barge into her room and open her curtains showing the sunlight. I'm curious if the werewolves were afraid of sunlight just like the other movies I watched? hmmm. Also anna being marked? who marked her? I wanna know.. and marked while still being a maid? who owned her? who marked her? I need answers ?. Anna is such a sweet heart, I think it's instinctual that Ovelia felt something similarly on anna. Maybe anna is also been abused back at her home before she was sent there to werewolves palace? hmmmmm.Also ovelia, I don't known if I call her dumb/stupid or courages and brave, but her bravery of still keep preparing ace a snacks is admirable even tho we know she knows she stumbled when accidentally spill the coffee to the paper. She still prepare again and it comes to fruition UNFORTUNATELY, I smell something like a love triangle? Hmmm. Ray, bro stay away from them. I don't think this will end well, hmmm. I love your work ??. Keep it up
Wow, really interesting prologue, it got be completely hooked, hahaha ??...Anyway, the book seems really promising and am so looking forward to more chapters from the author...Can't wait to know what happens to Melina at the end of the novel ??
Great start to a great novel! Enjoyed the tames greatly.