As a good come on start, the idea and the main character are very good, the comedy is fine,the time of downloading the chapters is wonderful, only the problem of clerical errors but on the whole the narration is beautiful.
I'm loving this story, please don't stop.
i really like it and the fact that he does anything to stop relying on the heavens for anything! looking forward to further chaps :D
Really enjoying it, eager to read more. Loving eliss and Lilly's chemistry. The way the author has described each scene, seems like watching a real movie.
Very nice......................
Excellent Work. I like the MC's character.Haven't shown much about the world background as of chapter 8. Very few writing mistakes and good execution. Now if only there were more chapter updates than that would be perfect.
Author here.If you find this story disturbing, just know my protagonist is someone who’s never had the right parenting. His actions and thoughts, which you’re reading from his perspective, might just reflect a troubled mindset.Feel free to ask any question and don’t hesitate to state your doubts.Don’t worry. I won’t look at them!
This book is perfectly interesting ❤️. You really did well in writing this story author. Fascinating plot twist and interesting character. Keep it up ❤️❤️❤️
Dear readers,I want to take a moment to thank you for embarking on this journey with me. As some of you may know, this story is a fresh beginning, a complete reinvention of what I once tried to create. The original work was filled with amateur mistakes—narrative flaws, plot inconsistencies, and a lack of originality that I simply could not ignore. With this new novel, I have poured my heart and soul into every word, bringing together all the tools and insights I’ve gathered over the years to build a fantasy world that feels vivid, immersive, and alive.Unlike the previous version, this story sets a deliberate pace. The first 150 chapters are dedicated to establishing a rich world full of complex characters, intriguing relationships, and perilous challenges that will test our protagonist, Raimon, at every turn. Each event, each piece of dialogue, serves to build a foundation that will sustain the narrative for the many adventures to come. It is a world I hope you can lose yourselves in, one with depth, beauty, and dangers that lurk in every shadow.I welcome any and all feedback. Your thoughts, whether praise or critique, are invaluable as they help me shape and refine this world. If, by chapter 80, you find that the story hasn’t met your expectations, I will understand if you choose to step away, and I sincerely apologize for any time you feel may have been wasted. But if this tale captures your imagination, I promise that the journey beyond will be worth every step.This novel has been in the making for over three years, and I am excited to share it with you. It is a story crafted with care and passion, and one that I hope will resonate with you as deeply as it does with me. We will explore not just the battles and victories of our protagonist but also the meaning of loyalty, courage, and sacrifice. There are countless adventures ahead, and Raimon's path is only just beginning.Thank you for your time, your attention, and your trust in my work. Let’s dive together into a world of magic, danger, and dreams.With gratitude,[BlueHanma]
Very interested to see where this story goes! Very promising beginning! The quality o the writing is good, and the chapter length is quite consistent too.
Nice story , Very very very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodI like that,
So, good effort. Fair warning, I've only read to about chapter 27.My thoughts on this...I hate the time skips and the character is jumping around all these places, it's very irrational. Unfortunately, before any side characters can be fleshed out or even any situation can be fleshed out properly the scene is changed and then the MC is doing something else.The world is never really fleshed out, I know the author says there are 3 huge continents and you HAVE to go to the academy in order to get a certificate to get in a dungeon... We also know that the police will allow an 11 year old 'healer' to go into a hostage situation with no knowledge of his skills other than that he can cast a powerful heal spell.... had me scratching my head at this version of the police who would allow this based on an 11 year old HEALER saying 'Trust me'.Then suddenly the author brings religion into it and they are calling him a 'saint'. Honestly, it reads like the author wasn't sure what they wanted to do and kept deciding to change it around as he went.Also, even though it's called 'Healing System' and his class is a 'Healer' it still seems like the author is taking it down the road of the MC being a warrior/sniper (or similar) with 'healing ability'. (I've only read to about chapter 27 though)I do NOT want to discourage the author. Even though I am dropping it, I wanted to give the author this feedback so that they can improve on these things. There is only so much disbelief you can ask a reader to do before they are pulled out of a story.I recommend slowing the pace down and fleshing out the world and the MC. You can still have him move around, but there should be more descriptions and backstory on why things are the way they are. Unless it's just a video game he's stuck in there should be a reason. (And most game developers try to add a reason in as well).