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Absolute dog shit of a novel might as well stop writing this and start on a new project which il make sure to stay clear from. Absolute dog shit plot, mild NTR with sole bullshit plot on him still loving her when she cheated on him . Like if she really loved Christ then she would have never kissed him in the first place and god knows what woulda happened if christ didnt see that shit novels like this is why i like to read on pirated website as atleast my money is intact while u can steal the time i wasted reading this and the emotional damge and stress reading some have assed novel which had spelling mistakes everywhere and to top it off with the cuckery. Can tell you that you with how your writing the novel fix up if u want to make it big otherwise find another hobby as novel writing aint for yah absolute dogshit plot this is . I have a dozen more things to say but il leave it at that for now
Even though my rating is not very high I do enjoy this novel throughly. The reason behind my ratings will be explained following: World background- never actually established we can only guess as the reader it takes place in the real world with only four locations named two of which are schools and the final two being towns/cities, Updating Stability- actually falls under the category of being unable to be defined by a star rating due to being a new novel, Character Design- Currently few details are given about any character and character growth seems to be minimal currently (new novel), Story Development- There has been some degree of development however I feel there as also been a step backwards [in regards to the step backwards: Day two of the new school shows a side character having a showdown with the main character in the form of a question however it was established on day one that no other student besides the main character was able to answer the most difficult physics question on the previous test. This all comes together as a waste of time and needlessly added to fill space (if the author were to rework this as to having this class take part prior to the test answer review or state it as the other student was absent the issue would be solved. Overall it is not an actual major issue and easy to overlook)], Writing Quality-So far there have been no issues with name disassociation, or translation errors (as far as I am aware) meaning this novel is leagues above others.
"Ready your hearts and gears. We're going after it!"
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
"Here we are, the purify room," said Nurseman, i mean Nurse person.
"Sorry sir, a little incorrect, I mean 12 months".
The more fungus, the more noble someone is.
Then suddenly a thought came to me and my heart beat rose.
"It seems that I need return to my old business. I haven't stolen the money for many years."